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Title: New World, Old World

Ok I'm a dummy.. I was the one who left the previous comment about why was their planet so similar and to explain the differences.. Err.. maybe I should've waited to read the other chapters before commenting.. :) regardless great chapter!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 03:45 am
Title: New World, Old World

I like that we are finally getting to see some interaction between Vita and Carla. I'm looking forward to more alone time wth them. Bring on the shopping excursion. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 06:37 am
Title: New World, Old World

Wow! I thank you Karen Angel for this chapter:D, the font looks fine to me. This chapter was short but sweet. Vita is at war with himself due to his disorder. I hope that the sweet sensitive side is the integral personality. I can't wait to see how Vita interacts with Carla as well as when Aza comes back and has to share Carla's time with a now interested Vita:) thanks again. 

 

 Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 02:10 am
Title: New World, Old World

I didn't have any problems with the font on my side so not sure what you were referring to.

Great update.  I am glad that Vita wanted to take Carla out and try to get to know her better he is beginning to grow on me I wish that he was not having so many headaches though and the other personality was not trying to domanate so much.  Someone should have told him that he can catch more bees with sweet honey maybe Carla will be the one to inform him of such when she finally gets over her fear of him.

Thank you.

More please

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

That is good to hear. Last night it looked so wonky.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2012 05:00 pm
Title: New World, Old World

Dang!! I could see why she would think they arent fond of her. They have issues expressing compassion anyway great update!!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2012 08:29 am
Title: New World, Old World

love the update, a little on the short side but I still love it. as far as the font goes it seems to happen sometimes.

 Reviewer: nikol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2012 07:53 am


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