Reviews For Falling Stars
Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

looking forward to updates in the near future. (hint, hint)

Reviewer: sparkle Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 04:44 am

Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Glad your back, Carla please stand up and defend yourself!

Reviewer: Mountaingal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2013 03:39 am

Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Finally Carla has some back bone..now for to get both men or alien in bed an put them in there place...at least I shall hope she could put it on them like that..inquiring minds would like to know...though I know this would be her second time mating

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 04:43 pm

Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Love the update and it was titled well, Yeesh! Aza should be kissing the ground Carla walks on after all the times she has shown empathy to him in regards to Vita's violence against him. But alas, he still can't stop calling her idiot. I hate that word now. Then there is Vita who I think the good part of him was out and now the sinister part of his dual personality is in control now. Damn! I thought there was going to be some bonding going on over and after dinner but I guess it's early in the game for that. The new Sato attendant if he is new, seems okay but I don't trust him, it's the enemy that cuddles up to you that is the most dangerous. Well, I can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 08:11 pm

Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Damn who knew that an alien could have split personality.  Vita is crazy!! ThatTassau thing is just as untrustworthy as Vita! Aza's father is just plain evil!  Kill all of the evil just leaving Aza and Carla to be together. Awesome!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 08:43 pm

Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Good to see you and the story back!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 04:52 pm

Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Really pleased to see this story back. I love this story so far but I'm getting a bit frustrated with Carla's lack of backbone. It's bad enough she gets pushed around by Aza and Vita but the servants too? It's time she stood up for herself.

Reviewer: Yaya Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 03:55 pm



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