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Title: Sorry

Loved the update! Hope Carla survives the wedding!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 04:46 am
Title: New World, Old World

Ok I'm a dummy.. I was the one who left the previous comment about why was their planet so similar and to explain the differences.. Err.. maybe I should've waited to read the other chapters before commenting.. :) regardless great chapter!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 03:45 am
Title: Consuming Warmth

Ok please don't take this the wrong wrong way because I'm really intrigued with this story. I just found it and can't put it down. You've created done interesting personalities. But there are some things that are bugging me.. so Vito is an interesting character because he is so evil but now I'm staring to see him in a different light. I think he's very interesting. In my opinion he's character is the most developed so far. ok Ava he's.. I don't know just there. I guess he's coming along but Im indifferent to him for some reason. Carla to me us just plain annoying... some of things she says are not only childish but its like something us wrong with her mentally. She speaks soo immature for a 21 year old. She talks about her stuffed lion, has tantrums and constantly calls him a jerk, refers to her gown as a Disney gown, manga??? and she introduces herself as, "My name is Starshine Carla"... reminds me of a 4 year old.

 

She is brave Ill give her that but her clumsy, dimwitted comments are a little bizarre. But maybe you'll develop her character more?? Also I thought your planet is weirdly very much like ours. Comptuers and four post beds?IIt would be rally good if you explained the similarities and differences of the planet. I know its really hard to picture an alien planet without having more specifics. I think this angle of having psychopath mutating aliens is VERY interesting. Im really exited to go through the rest of the chapters. Please keep writing... :-)

 

 Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 03:26 am
Title: Sorry

Can't wait to see what else is in store for the threesome.. For some odd reason I want the three of them to work...maybe it's the ménage trois that is really interesting..

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 01:00 am
Title: The old lion.

I wish the would stop speaking to her that way it's annoying the hell out of me. I don't understand why Carla doesn't say something to Aza or Vita. I don't think Vita would appreciate the way his servants are treating her.

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2013 08:06 pm
Title: Sorry

Cool, the nuptials are about to begin. Russau is a trip and Aza's family needs foot to ass! plus which Vita will be saying I do?  Thanks I can't wait to read more:)

 Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2013 06:15 pm
Title: Sorry

Good to see an update. The apology took me off guard as much as Carla. I'm wondering how this will turn out and really wishing the king was dead. More please :)

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Date: April 20 2013 04:36 pm
Title: Sorry

Awesome. cant wait for the ceromony!!

 Reviewer: sparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2013 04:06 pm
Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Glad your back, Carla please stand up and defend yourself!

 Reviewer: Mountaingal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2013 03:39 am
Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Finally Carla has some back bone..now for to get both men or alien in bed an put them in there place...at least I shall hope she could put it on them like that..inquiring minds would like to know...though I know this would be her second time mating

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 04:43 pm
Title: Welcome Home

Loving this story..really creative dynamic between the characters. However, I'm starting to sympathize with Vita...I mean he's illness is making him lose control of himself and it's preventing him from obtaining what he desire most: love.

It's kind of sad and it's a bit fustrating that no one has yet to really notice or try to help him, even he doesn't actually recognize what is going on. It's chapter 15 and nothing has been done about it yet....the issue of his illness has remained stagnant and hasn't really moved foward yet :/

 Reviewer: Clarissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2013 04:46 am
Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Love the update and it was titled well, Yeesh! Aza should be kissing the ground Carla walks on after all the times she has shown empathy to him in regards to Vita's violence against him. But alas, he still can't stop calling her idiot. I hate that word now. Then there is Vita who I think the good part of him was out and now the sinister part of his dual personality is in control now. Damn! I thought there was going to be some bonding going on over and after dinner but I guess it's early in the game for that. The new Sato attendant if he is new, seems okay but I don't trust him, it's the enemy that cuddles up to you that is the most dangerous. Well, I can't wait to read what happens next.

 Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 08:11 pm
Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Damn who knew that an alien could have split personality.  Vita is crazy!! ThatTassau thing is just as untrustworthy as Vita! Aza's father is just plain evil!  Kill all of the evil just leaving Aza and Carla to be together. Awesome!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 08:43 pm
Title: The old lion.

When will someone notice that Vita mood swings come with the headaches? Carla really needs to get a backbone for real and stand up to someone. Stop letting the servants treat and talk to her any kind of way.  

Glad you are back looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 06:59 pm
Title: Destiny Revealed

Look Carla enjoy that after all. I really want Vita dead!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 06:40 pm
Title: The world is mine.

Vita is a vile mitch who will never have Aza's love. Carla and Aza will burn up the sheets.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 06:26 pm
Title: Found Possessions.

Alright Carla fight for Aza! Vita is jealous Mitch! That is a male *itch in case you were wondering.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 06:17 pm
Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Good to see you and the story back!

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 04:52 pm
Title: The old lion.

I just started reading this, don't know how I missed it, but this first chapter already has sucked me in completely.

Bravo!

 Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 04:26 pm
Title: Two steps forward, a leap backward

Really pleased to see this story back. I love this story so far but I'm getting a bit frustrated with Carla's lack of backbone. It's bad enough she gets pushed around by Aza and Vita but the servants too? It's time she stood up for herself.

 Reviewer: Yaya Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 03:55 pm
Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

Please update soon. I miss Carla, Aza, and even Vita:)

 Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 06:01 am
Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

looking forward to next update?

 Reviewer: sparkle Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2013 04:17 am
Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

Please update!

 Reviewer: Sin Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 05:03 am
Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

amazing

 Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2013 05:52 pm
Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

 im so glad that you updated. i wonder who would be her nurse? i hope its a human, i would be suprise if it's Tyler so they can become closer in the mean while  Aza gets jealouse because shes giving Tyler more attention LOL

any way can't wait to read more :)

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Date: January 23 2013 06:36 pm


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