Reviews For Falling Stars
Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

Poor Carla. She just can not catch a break, but glad Aza came to her defense. What is really going on with Ruasa? I wonder what he wants Kavitak to spy on? So many questions, can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2013 04:45 am

Title: The old lion.

I am so glad to see that I'm not the only one that dislikes the way they man handle Carla and think it's okay.. It's not okay.. Vita needs to find out what happen to Carla and handle it accordingly..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 22 2013 03:00 am

Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

I love this story,but I am getting sick of the man handling of Carla. Aza is still the only male that is halfway decent. Kavitak should be punished severely for what he did. I wished for Vita to have cone instead. Kavitak would have just put his head between his legs & kissed his sorry ads goodbye. Still a great chapter, thanks.

Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2013 02:14 am

Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

Love this story! Glad your back. :) Is the new servant going to be human?

Reviewer: Karrotpulp Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2013 01:29 am

Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

Loved the update! Glad she wasn't badly injured. Hope Ruasu is truto the prince and doesn't betray him. Also hope the medicine she's being given doesn't harm her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2013 01:08 am

Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

great as usual

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 06:40 pm

Title: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

Thanks for the update...

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 04:54 pm

Title: The old lion.

Someone needs to tell Vita what happened to Carla.. Has he anyone that is truly loyal to him??

Just whan the chapter is getting good it's over.. Bummer!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 04:48 pm

Title: Understanding

Oh Vita, Vita! I am still on the fence, but am liking him more each chapter. I hope he is able to  get well and then he can truly be a part of the new Aza/Carla relationship, which I love:)

I look everyday to see when this story updates because it is my favorite. Keep up the good work in the new year.

 

Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 10:44 pm

Title: Understanding

Aww!! Finally we are making progress. I'm even starting to like Vita a bit more.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2012 12:41 am

Title: Understanding

That was nice, but I'm really getting bored with the always trying to be friends with the aliens scenario lets just cut to the chase and skip to the 3threesome with Asa, Carla, and Vita! make it extra freaky j/k lol 

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 05:06 am

Title: Understanding

Karen Angel, this is by far the best chapter yet. I don't know if Vita is really turning a corner or not but at least the relationship between Aza and Carla seems to be on track. I am concerned with the way Kavitk and Seeya treat Carla considering that she is to be in this triad. I wish that Aza or Vita would catch them being mean to her. I know that by the end of this chapter you give Kavitk a little bit of redemption but I don't trust them. Carla is getting stronger and hopefully more confident in herself. Thanks and I hope you feel better, that flu crud is really strong this season. I've had many students and faculty out with it too. Be well and again thank you.

Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 02:03 am

Title: Understanding

YAY!! This update just made my day! :D I've been checking everyday for an update for this story. No joke. J love it. Keep up the awesome work!! Merry early Christmas!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 08:12 pm

Title: The old lion.

Awesome update!!!

It's good to see Carla standing up for herself and Aza trying to show more emotions towards her.. I think once they both realze Vita is sick they will help him find a way to get better.. I'm not so sure we can trust Vita guard..

Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 08:06 pm

Title: Understanding

Thank you... Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 05:24 pm

Title: Understanding

Good short update, and thanks for spacing out the paragraphs it made it easier to read.

 

I do hope Vita gets some help. I kind of feel bad for him because it's not completely his fault that he's a moster at times.  

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 07:56 am

Title: Taking A Stand

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Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2012 10:05 am

Title: Taking A Stand

more please....

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2012 09:09 am

Title: Taking A Stand

I'm glad Carla finally toook a chance, and Aza is opening up more. I hope that maybe if the three of them spend more time bonding they can help Vita overcome his madness. 

Thanks for updating! 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2012 08:15 am

Title: Taking A Stand

Thanks for the update eventhough it was sort of short.

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2012 03:29 am

Title: Taking A Stand

I'm glad Aza is trying to work it out with Carla.  I am sure she will not know what to do with him:) I don't know if Vita should trust Ruasu or not.

Wonderful update as always.

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2012 03:28 am

Title: The old lion.

I love this story but there is one thing I don't understand why do the princes let the help talk to an treat Clara any old kind of way..  I know they think of her as cattle or someone beneath them but it's not cool at all the way they treat her. They should at least have some fear that if they treat her too badly one of the princes would punish them.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2012 05:18 pm

Title: The old lion.

I LOVE THIS STORY. NEVER STOP. Okay phycho phase over. But no joke I love it. I imagen the story as an anime and cant get enough. :) waiting for the next dose for my addiction. Take your time your doing great! :)

Reviewer: Karrotpulp Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 02:37 am

Title: Revelations

He's falling in love with her Aza needs to stop calling her names it's so child

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2012 07:58 am

Title: Revelations

What is up with Ruasu?  I just love the interactions between Carla and Aza. 

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2012 12:39 am



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