Great update but I was wondering if the trio will actually share an sexual experience together other than the punishment that vita bestowed toward aza and Carla. What will vita say about the mark on Carla's neck?
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: November 05 2012 02:49 pm
awsome as always but I would really like to see more of an interaction between vita and Carla.
Reviewer: nikol Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 07:21 am
Yaaay!!! Glad Aza is back,he treats Carla bad but he's much better than that Vita,ugh
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2012 01:52 am
Awww so sweet, so glad Vita did'nt hurt her.
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 09:30 pm
I love Carla andAza, but am so confused about Vita. I don't know to hope if he becomes cured or not. I am soooo glad Aza is back.
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 06:09 am
Hopefully things will work out
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 05:28 am
Vita is growing on me. I so hope that his mates will be able to help him from this darkside that he is plagued with it sound like he is in so much pain when it takes over.
I so der what happen with Aza for him to need comfort to.
Great update thank u! Happy writing
[Report This]Date: October 28 2012 04:51 am
Awww, this was soooo short:( I love this story and this chapter albeit very good was short. I'm glad that Aza is back and Carla has someone to at least have a half way decent relationship with. I hate this side of Vita, it is so violent and malicious. He seems to get off on the terror. I have to disagree with the review that wants Vita and Aza to be lovers. How do you love your rapist? I've read quite a few menages that have had MMF relationships and none of them involve rape. You've got your work cut out for you with Vita but your talented so I know you can do it. You had me feeling sorry for Vita and hoping he turned a corner with Carla with this shopping trip but damn he screwed that away royally. I hope the next chapter has more of Aza and Carla. Vita can go piss in the wind.
Reviewer: Charly43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 02:27 am
I missed Aza and his usrliness. He's the lesser of two evils.
Reviewer: Shae Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 01:47 am
I LOVE this story!!! I cant wait until Vita and Carla (and) Vita and Aza get into more of a relationship that isnt consant fear. Cant wait for their bonding ceremony either. Hopefully it'll bring out more feelings than they are showing. aka Vita and Aza really knowing that they like human girl lol.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 22 2012 05:41 am
Great story and great chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next and when is Aza coming back?! I miss him and the raw emotions he always exudes. Vita is like a slow simmer and it's taking him a lot of time to just get a little under the surface of Carla. I'm glad that she has found some kindred spirit in another human who has survived the invasion but only feels all that he has suffered. Carla seems to have opened his eyes to the fact that pain is pain and nobody has the market on that. Please update soon:)
Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 18 2012 04:32 am
OMG I love this chapter! Finally she tries to do something for herself. I'm so glad shes found another human and I get the feeling this isn't the last we see of this Tyler?
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2012 04:32 pm
Ahhh! Carla was able to get away for a moment but we know it won't last. She met a fellow human even though when she stated her name it was not received in a welcoming manner @ first.
If they caught her she should tell them that she got seperated from the attendants and got turned around and came upon the food court. I wonder if they would believe her. And we all know that Vita will be angry to see another touching her and she feeling at peace with it.
Wonderful update more please. Thank you
Happy wriing!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2012 04:14 pm
Good chapter need more!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2012 09:09 am
Poor Carla!! Feel for her but she's gonna be sorry when Vita catches up with her!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2012 07:31 am
I am so glad that Carla met another human and doesn't feel so lonely, but I don't want her falling for him. I still need her with Aza, especially after learning more about his loser father. I wonder what Vita is going to do when he finds Carla holding hands with a human male. Yikes!!
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2012 05:56 am
Wow this story is so damn good! I am still team Aza and after reading this chapter even more so. I don't think he has ever had a kind word or any loving affection except for what he took from Carla and the mixed signals he gives her. I am now routing for the three of them to come together as a triad and I hope that means that Vita won't rape him anymore and that his love for Aza becomes more of a triad with Carla being both of their nucleus. I love this story and hope that there is a big helping of payback to Aza's bastard parents. Whatever you have in store for them is not cruel or deserving enough. Thanks and can't wait for the next chapter:D
Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 02 2012 01:42 am
This alien world is so cold and cruel..I feel so bad for Aza and wonder if there is another shocking moment with the shopping trip coming up which I'm sure will be, but I'm waiting for more interaction between Aza and the childlike Carla.This story can become very confusing at times and because of this I sometimes have to go back and reread past updates because of the long intervals in between.While the content can be brutal at times and disconcerting, I'm going to stick with this story...
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2012 08:57 pm
what a nightmare! poor Aza, how can his father be so cruel
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2012 07:18 am
How sad Aza's life seem to be. Hope he can find some happiness with Carla.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2012 06:22 am
I like that we are finally getting to see some interaction between Vita and Carla. I'm looking forward to more alone time wth them. Bring on the shopping excursion.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: September 25 2012 06:37 am
Wow! I thank you Karen Angel for this chapter:D, the font looks fine to me. This chapter was short but sweet. Vita is at war with himself due to his disorder. I hope that the sweet sensitive side is the integral personality. I can't wait to see how Vita interacts with Carla as well as when Aza comes back and has to share Carla's time with a now interested Vita:) thanks again.
Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 02:10 am
I didn't have any problems with the font on my side so not sure what you were referring to.
Great update. I am glad that Vita wanted to take Carla out and try to get to know her better he is beginning to grow on me I wish that he was not having so many headaches though and the other personality was not trying to domanate so much. Someone should have told him that he can catch more bees with sweet honey maybe Carla will be the one to inform him of such when she finally gets over her fear of him.
Thank you.
More please
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
That is good to hear. Last night it looked so wonky.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2012 05:00 pm
Dang!! I could see why she would think they arent fond of her. They have issues expressing compassion anyway great update!!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2012 08:29 am