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Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

So sad this was the last chapter.  I really like this story. 

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Date: March 13 2016 03:21 am
Title: Five- Drawing a line in the sand

They are so good for each other.  Go Nichard!!!

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Date: March 13 2016 01:36 am
Title: Three Counter-attack and the retreat

Liked it a lot.  Somebody is getting pretty angry ...

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Date: March 12 2016 11:47 pm
Title: Two -The Invasion

Carmen is something else.

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Date: March 12 2016 10:33 pm
Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

This story was so good. The ending was right on point because that bitch is crazy! Lol. I enjoyed this story and hope there is a sequel. You do write crazy well lol

 

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Date: March 07 2016 04:21 pm
Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

OH No its over. However, i really enjoyed this story. That damn Carmen is CRAZY!! Kudos to you as a writer.

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Date: March 02 2016 04:03 am
Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

Is there going to be a sequel? I want to see this chapter from Nichole's POV. 

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Date: March 01 2016 07:21 am
Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

cue the loony tunes music. I can't see how this crazy heifer was even able to function with all that crap going on in her head. She belongs on the ID channel. If she ever gets out...

This was really good.

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Date: March 01 2016 04:01 am
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

"Get your ass out of this house before I drop you again."

This made me cackle. Richard is not the one.

Carmen is all kinds of crazy. Dang.

It's everybody's fault but her own. She needs to never see the light of day again.

Whew, Richard was out of control. Nic, you need some rest, girl. :)

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Date: March 01 2016 03:54 am
Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

Yes yes yes I am so glad to see an update from you even if it's a end to an amazing story. Loved it from beginning to end and I will be on the lookout for more updates in the future!!!

 

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Date: February 29 2016 05:02 am
Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

rapist father, so was she molseted as a child? looking forward to seeing how she pans on ngetting herself out.

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Date: February 29 2016 04:01 am
Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

She tried to kill her mother and only 8 years of confinement?  Her typed of crazy has not cure but she deserves to spend the rest of life behind bars.  I hope that she gets shanked!!!

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Date: February 29 2016 12:11 am
Title: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

I enjoyed your story

Perfect ending for Carmen crazy ass!

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Date: February 28 2016 11:52 pm
Title: Two -The Invasion

You take Narcissism to a whole different level dont you Carmen

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Date: March 06 2015 04:04 pm
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

Great story, I can't wait for you to finish this story. I pray Please finish this story and "The Collateral", LOL! I love Nichole and Richard together and the love between them is HOT!!! LOL!!

I really love Victoria and Josef Manteri I and I am heartbroken that evil devil's whore & her mini- demon fiends did to them, so I hope there is something special for them.

Also, you never gave the full what happened to Colin? Knowing Carmen I can only cringe at what she did. I REALLY hope you will make sure Carmen and her fiends' (especially Crystal) pays heavily for their disgusting way.

PLEASE, PLEASE keep writing, you are missed and well-loved by us. So I hope you come back and shut us all up. LOL!!. You have wonderful stories and they are ALL are fun, sexy, exciting, and addictive :D

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Date: June 25 2014 06:54 pm
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

Wow, old girl is really living in cloud coo-coo land.  I hope you come back and finish this story as well as A Redneck's Woman. 

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Date: April 21 2014 01:35 am
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

I need more Forks and Knives!

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Date: April 04 2014 05:13 pm
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

Awesome as always! I love this story and I am glad that you want to see it through to the end becuase it is awesome, 

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Date: October 06 2013 01:45 pm
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

Oh please please please finish this story I can't wait till she's locked up 

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Date: October 06 2013 01:36 am
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

i have no problem at all for you wanting to complete this story, richard done knocked poor roman out due to sexual frustrations; i like the protective side of richard. i wonder if they are going to use the mental evaluation of carmen against her in court to get her locked up. i didn't think that nichole was going to lose her virginity that way. great update i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 10:46 pm
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

WOW!!!! That is all I can say.

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Date: October 05 2013 10:37 pm
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

I absolutely love this book, it has the elements that I looking to read...Thank you for sharing

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Date: October 05 2013 09:58 pm
Title: Ten~ A wanted woman

I am glad that the crazy is finally in custody.I am so glad that Olover and the doctor see Carmen for what she truly is which is crazy as fuck!!  Nichole broke Richard off piece or rather Richard gangstered some pun tang.  I love this story and I am surprised sad that you are rushing to the ending especially since we waited so long for an update. So good! 

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Date: October 05 2013 09:26 pm
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

She is crazy she doesn't have to fake it

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Date: October 05 2013 05:14 am
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

I hope she kicks her a@!

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 05:03 am


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