Reviews For To Love the Devil
Title: 99 Problems

I really miss this story.  I hope you updated soon.

Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2017 01:58 pm

Title: Miss Independent

Great story! I love the plot and the characters so far are amazing. However your been tense is everywhere and words are being misused. Please don't ever stop writing but consider an editor.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2016 01:43 pm

Title: 99 Problems

OMG you did decide to continue this story.  I am SO excited.   

Now onto all of these relationships.  So much happening with all of them.  But the real twist is the final scene.  I can't believe that she packed her gifts up but this might be the line that they can not come back from.  They really need to figure out who they are to and for each other before the world comes crashing down.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 12:56 am

Title: 99 Problems

I like this story, but I just realized, you don't do love scenes... Do you? It's okay, I guess with all the erotica out there as a reader you kind of learn to expect it. But it was confusing at times when it was implied they did something, I wa back reading chapters trying to locate where Jack finally physically accepted him. I know she interested and aroused, but never found when she actually became intimate with him. It has been awhile since I read this 11/2015. Oh well, can't wait for the ne t chapter.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2016 12:06 am

Title: 99 Problems

I like this story, but I just realized, you don't do love scenes... Do you? It's okay, I guess with all the erotica out there as a reader you kind of learn to expect it. But it was confusing at times when it was implied they did something, I wa back reading chapters trying to locate where Jack finally physically accepted him. I know she interested and aroused, but never found when she actually became intimate with him. It has been awhile since I read this 11/2015. Oh well, can't wait for the ne t chapter.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2016 11:55 pm

Title: 99 Problems

Why can't these two just admit that they like and have feelings for one another

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2016 08:54 pm

Title: Cast

So happy you updated this story. Looking forward to reading more of it!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 02 2016 12:35 pm

Title: 99 Problems

What did he expect?  He didn't exactly DTR.  I mean she is there not of her own free will.  He didn't court her or take her out on dates.  How does she know what he does with his girlfriend and the FACT he HAS a girlfriend automatically puts her in the role of mistress and whore.  He isn't taking her to fancy restaurants like Roxanne so WHY does he think she should feel differently?  James needs to sit down and use his analytical thinking mind versus his emotions to truly see what position she is in.  Heck, she can't go anywhere by herself.  She is locked up in his house daily with no interaction except him (her captor), Ace (her captors friend) and a phone call with her cousin Mo.  He doesn't tell her he picked all of this out by himself etc.  She isn't a mind reader James.  Also she isn't like Roxanne and Katherine, trinkets, jewelry doesn't provide her with security or peace.  She felt closer to him when he shared something with her that was personal than material items.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 05:38 pm

Title: Tell'Em I Said That

I am really enjoying this story

Reviewer: Xaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 03:06 pm

Title: Cast

Loveeeeeee this STORY!! So glad to see you back. I'm a little sad that things are about to go sour with them. They are obviously feeling each other. 

 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 12:54 pm

Title: 99 Problems

Glad you are back with an update. I hope to read another chapter soon.

Reviewer: madison Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 04:43 am

Title: Cast

I am happy to see a new chapter in this story.  Armani is about to be dead soon.

Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 01:39 am

Title: Tell'Em I Said That

I like the story, and I'm sure I am not the 1st to say this.... Plz proofread or get a beta reader. I am not saying this as a put down, I love the plot... but the gazillion typos take away from the story.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 07:43 am

Title: Tell'Em I Said That

This story is amazing! I devoured all 15 chapters can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2015 02:54 am

Title: Help!

Those lines ....lol

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 06:19 pm

Title: Miss Independent

I know what id get Katherine for Mother's day a nice glass of arsenic

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 06:10 pm

Title: Miss Independent

I know what id get Katherine for Mother's day a nice glass of arsenic

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 06:09 pm

Title: A Price to Pay

Wow...there are bad mother,there are terrible mothers and then there's Katherine

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 03:21 pm

Title: Cast

Hello, please update. Miss this story. Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 02 2014 11:50 pm

Title: Tell'Em I Said That

Very interesting story, with a mother like she has she does not need any enemies. I like the chemistry between the Jack and James. The way she set Roxy in her place was classic. Just a thought, Mo and Ace hooking up. That Armani, SMH, why does he need to cause problems. I hope Lisa doesn't open her big mouth to him about Jackie. Well I do hope you complete this story.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2014 12:07 am

Title: Cast

Please Please Update (or publish) soon ;)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 11:55 pm

Title: Cast

Love it so far patiently waiting for the next update.

Reviewer: Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 10:37 pm

Title: Tell'Em I Said That

Great update, thanks for posting

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 07:09 am

Title: Tell'Em I Said That

I just luv this I hate how he treats her but I hope he is learning to luv keep up the great writing

Reviewer: Charming2i Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 06:56 am

Title: Tell'Em I Said That

I love this story and like that some outside conflict has been thrown into the mix.  Armani is just plain crazy.  Can't wait for him to see Jacqueline with James that will really given him something to be envious of since Lisa propably can't even come so to Jacqueline.

Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 05:24 pm



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