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Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

Are you ever going this story? I love it!!

 Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 12:37 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

please continue... im interested

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Date: May 28 2013 08:57 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

please continue... im interested

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Date: May 28 2013 08:57 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

Interesting start i definitely will look out for the next chapter

 Reviewer: Siren of the Darknessflame Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2013 07:34 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

Loved the update! Hope she can forgive her father and that she's willing to help Bastien.

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Date: April 15 2013 06:18 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

I know you were stuck in a rut but the direction you took was good.

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Date: April 15 2013 03:31 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

I know you were stuck in a rut but the direction you took was good.

 Reviewer: sominsweet Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 03:30 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

Great updated..now we know he isn't selling his daughter off... He really does love her....her mother is a cow, though

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 11:25 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

You worked this chapter out nicely. Now is the bookbag going to get lost in transit? lol

 Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 09:32 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

*isnt

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 07:21 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

I just hope that Cameron can really help Bastien and he can hlep her to...they  can become friends or something more...been waiting forever for you to update.

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Date: April 14 2013 06:08 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

Interesting beginning.  

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 05:34 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

Why is Robert divorcing Tamra now?

Futhermore, how as this supppose to make Cam's life easier? Cam is being robbed of choice to deside her future.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 04:18 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

if Robert's plan is just to get Cameron away, how did Tamara find out about the marriage pact? Is it even still on? Does Samuel still expect Robert's daughter to marry his son? And which son? This is what is not clear to me.

Will Cameron be going over there thinking and expecting one thing while everyone on Samuel's side is clueless? I hope she opens up the letter soon and it clarifies things for us readers...

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 03:10 pm
Title: The Touch of You

I like this story.  

I hope that the two of them are immediately attracted to each other even though they have these hurdles in front of them. 

I also hope that the brother talks to someone and gets some help.  I hope that he can tell his Dad about what that teacher did.  She shouldn't get away with this.  He has expereinced sexual trauma and is dealing with it through alcohol.  He's probably keeping quiet because there's a double standard for guys.  He's supposed to like the idea of the hot teacher wanting him.  He is confused and ashamed and needs someone to talk to.

 

Good story.

 

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 02:57 pm
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

Good. It's a good backstory for them! Now hurry and get her over there I'm dying to know how it goes.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 10:04 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

:) I'm glad her father is a jack ass like I thought he would be. It's ok if she doesn't forgive him, since he still betrayed her, but at least she knows why he sent her away. Please update soon. 

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 09:24 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

I so love the direction this is taking. What a twist. Tamara is laughing now, but not for long, I hope.  Wonderful.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 07:53 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

Destiny is a funny thing indeed.  I am sure that Robert did not see this coming or what had happened to Samuel's son.  Either way sending Cameron away will do her some good and maybe she might have a good time in the process.  The fact they made this agreement was wrong and should never interfere with their childrenl's lives.

 

 

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 07:03 am
Title: The Heart I Loved

Bastian feels that his life is over and he has every right to feel that way.  Right now he feels that nothing will ever be the same and that there is no chance of any happiness.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 06:59 am
Title: The Touch of You

I understand how she feels ab oyt this situation and that no one told her until now expecting her to go aling with it.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 06:56 am
Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning

I love this story and love the direction you decided to take but please make it a little longer, it was just getting interesting.

 

Great Job

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Date: April 14 2013 06:14 am
Title: The Heart I Loved

That was the condition :o well the responsable feels guilty even though it won't change anything to the situation.

I like the story so far, i'm on to the next chapter!

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 09 2013 10:20 am
Title: The Touch of You

I enjoyed this chapter

An evil wicked mother, an strange dad and what the other family thinks.

I'm on to the next chapter i want to know why both fathers would make a pact to marrying their child :@

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 09 2013 10:04 am
Title: Authors Note

Maybe they were best friends? I like that idea. Otherwise why would you force your children to get married?

Anyway I love this story. Read the two chapters and I cannot wait for more! :D

 Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 06 2013 12:01 am


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