Great writing style. This is such a touchy topic for me, especially when it deals with a black woman messing around with a different race that might look down on her because of her race. I would love to see her get some self-respect and for his wife to leave him and take all his stuff in the divorce. I'm telling you how to w
rite your story, it's just my vindictive side
Showing. Please write more!
Lol I enjoyed your comment. The whole situation is really jacked up isn't it. I will go into their relationship a little deeper in the next portion of the story. I want to take my time with it that's why I haven't posted it yet.Reviewer: Drbw Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 07:08 pm
It's done!?!! Please make a continuation or something. It just can't end there!
I've already started on the continuation. Chapter one of it is already complete.Reviewer: Shae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 05:50 am
I want to hate you for only making this a one shot....but I can only imagine what kind of craziness would ensue if you turned this full blown and I don't think my blood pressure would be able to manage....so on behalf of my blood pressure.....thank you for this steamy little tidbit!!!! LOL
Lol thank you! I am actually trying to make it a full blown story. I think thats going to ruin my blood pressure lol.Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 02:02 am
Yixing's a Hot jerk ! Damn ! Loved the story & wishing for more :-)
I already have chapter 1 of the next part finished.Reviewer: kisser Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 08:27 pm
Mas estupido!!! That was hot but I really don't like Yixing or Sherree as she's weak with no self respect and he's an married selfish asshole! How is going to explain the loss of his wedding ring to his wife? How did dumb, dumb ditty meet the ahole? Will write how they meet? I feel bad for Yixing's wife, dumb, dumb ain't the first. You have elicited some strong emotions with this story, more please. Will you post some casts pctures?
Thank you! Gettinig emotions from you means I've done my job as an author. I've worked on a prequel scrapped and thought about doing a sequel I don't know yet, and I have added pics.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 01:21 pm
Great story! Hope you continue it!! Would love to see what happens if Sheree was to leave Yixing!!
I'm trying to work on the next part, but I thought it was boring and scrapped it.Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 07:41 am
I liked it but I didn't like that she was so needy that she would put the fact he's married to the back of her mind just to have 1 hour of steamy hot sex.
She is dead wrong, but she'll get hers. You loose them how you got them.Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 05:19 am
Good story . I hope / wish this wasn't a one shot . More would be nice .
Attempting to work on. I'll get started in a bit.Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 05:11 am
I enjoyed it. I think Sheree is dumb but I know she's not the only one. I think you should consider turning this into a story bc I want to know more and I would like more for her.
Thank you for the comment! I've started working on a prequel or a sequel I just haven't been as creative as I'd like to be. This is one of the better stories I've written and I don't want to ruin a good thing by just throwing something together.Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 04:23 am