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Title: Chapter 2

Good update . Poor Aiden .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 05:52 am
Title: Chapter 3

Ohhh...nice pictures!

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Date: February 11 2013 05:32 am
Title: Chapter 3

Nice looking cast!!

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Date: February 11 2013 01:42 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like it. They seem like a cute couple.

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Date: February 10 2013 02:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

Congratulation for your first story, thanx for sharing it with us! It's a good start, you are poking my interest here. I like the idea of her surrounded by brothers, daddyand boyfriend, the idea of her turning into a woman by herself. Just make sure to reread your chapter before posting, you forgot the "I" in the last sentence. Make longer chapters, it helps satiate the famished readers (like me) while you take time to update. I can't wait to read more!

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Date: February 10 2013 12:46 am
Title: Chapter 1

Good start can't wait to see where this story goes.

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Date: February 09 2013 02:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. More please.

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Date: February 09 2013 06:08 am
Title: Chapter 1

Good start. More ?

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 09 2013 04:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

love it but aiden should be worried..four brothers and a dad that had to take his  daughter to get birth control

 Reviewer: tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 09 2013 04:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

LOL! I have to say I see Aiden's point on this one! Why is Bobby acting like she doesn't? It doesn't mean he's weak, just no fool.

Fan of the Doctor, huh?

 

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2013 04:34 am
Title: Chapter 1

Already I am convinced of Bobby's stupidity.  When Aiden meets your father, the only thing that your father will remember is that you asked him to take you to get on birth control.  Although I am glad that she had the sense to ask before being sexually active but you have to know that no man or boy will be good enough for his baby girl!!  Aiden you should have doubts.

Love it!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2013 03:40 am


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