Title: Act 1: Ch 10

So sad but at all shocking. 

 

 



Author's Response:

It is sad. This will prove to be a trial that they both have to face. They've been walking around their issues for too long, it was about time the truth came out.
Thanks so much for reading!

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Date: May 31 2013 12:55 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 9

wow.. a cliffhanger

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Date: May 21 2013 04:00 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 9

wow.. a cliffhanger

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Date: May 21 2013 03:54 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 8

One man with two baby mamma's.

It can only have a rough ending.

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Date: May 21 2013 03:46 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 5

Ah.... the little siblings you just want to kill them sometimes.



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Ha ha. So true.

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Date: May 21 2013 03:24 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 3

Jae has some decepion.

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Date: May 21 2013 01:22 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 2

This seems like young complicated love.



Author's Response:

Yes, a little too complicated at times. :)

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Date: May 21 2013 01:00 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 1

good start.

 

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Date: May 21 2013 12:44 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 9

Jae-Hoon your time is drawing near, you need to tell Cassie that your ex-ho is pregnant with your child.  She won't take well, since you have put her on the back burner in order to deal with your ex-ho.  On top of your lying by omission, she lost your baby.  No, she won't take that news well at all.  I can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

LOL

Tell him pmgayles!

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Date: May 14 2013 02:32 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 9

 Did not expect the miscarriage.  This is a sad moment but it was the only way they would talk to each other.  There is still many things to dicuss.  Jae will have to come clran.with her or risk losing the woman he loves for good.  Everyone has skeletons but that does not mean that life is a dead end.

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Date: May 13 2013 03:17 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 8

They both have their trials that are forcing them to make fast decisions.  What is needed is time to communicate .

 

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Date: May 06 2013 07:01 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 7

News like this is something that needs to be discussed in person and not at the spur of the moment.  Where will this lead them.



Author's Response:

So true. Often times people skim over a problem just so that they can get it out of the way and avoid confrentation. But when you do that, nothing gets resolved. Thanks for your input :)

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Date: May 06 2013 06:46 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 8

Now I remember why Diana doesn't like Have!  He needs to fix his business and tell Cassie before his ex does. Such a good story!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it <3

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Date: May 05 2013 06:48 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 8

Wow, Jae-Hoon is whole! Is it Cassie's fault that your ex-girlfriend is preggers. Cassie needs to woman upand tell Jae that you yourself are pregnant. I was results that his ex's baby wouldn't be his but my hope has been foiled!  Why doesn't Diana like Jae-Hoon?  I so want those two to get it together.

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Date: May 05 2013 06:43 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 8

I know that Diana has her sister''s best interests at heart and I'm glad she didn't disclose what she saw at the office (definite breach of confidentiality) but she really needs to fall back some. This is between Cassandra and Jay and their baby. Jae needs to quit keeping secrets because he's only hurting their relationship. More please.



Author's Response:

Yeah, there's nothing like having a younger overprotective sibling. Sometimes people do more harm than good when they're this way. Thanks so much :) 

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Date: May 05 2013 12:19 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 6

Jae-Hoon couldn't tell Cassandra about the baby thing, Why? he could be getting the support he needs while dealing with crazy.

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Date: April 16 2013 06:49 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 6

Drama,Drama,and more Drama.  Things really are heating up. I did not expect the situation at the Hospital.  I know know that this is what he has been dreading about.  Either way i know he will feel he has hurt Cassandra once again.  I also wonder what is wrong with Cassandra and how she will take the news.

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Date: April 15 2013 09:21 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 5

Her sister really is something else, i would prabably feel the same way Cassandra is now.  They are moving at their own pace, enjoying every moment they have together.  The futrure is unclear and it is understadable for Jae-Hoon's feelings of calme before the storm.  They are in a realationship that is rare and often met opposition.

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Date: April 15 2013 09:03 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 4

There is nothing wrong with picking up the pieces and trying to start a realtionship because the feeling were all ready there.  I know she loves him and is afraid that he might leave again.  It just seems that they had to wait for the right time.

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Date: April 15 2013 08:29 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 6

Cliff hangers are evil! Is Cassandra alright? Please don't let that ho be pregnant with Jae's baby, Cassandra would drop him like a bad habit. I like Jar, bug what the hell did he see in Antoinette? She's selfish, narcissistic and morally bankrupt, so what was the attraction? There is no way that Antoinette is more beautiful than Cassandra. This is a mess and I can't wait go read more!



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha! Thanks so much. I know, this is quite a mess. I kinda feel bad about making them go through this, but it must be done!

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Date: April 15 2013 01:57 pm

Title: Episode 1: Ch 6

I don't think Diana should be so quick to tell her sister. She knows only what she's seen and not anything about the circumstances behind it. Give him a chance before going off half-cocked. By the same token, Jae-Hoon should have already told her what the deal was by now. 



Author's Response:

You are so right. It would not do anyone good if they just jumped the gun all willy neally.

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Date: April 15 2013 11:34 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 6

Ah! 

Cliff hangers kill me! 

D:

I hate men sometime. Majority really are trifling! 

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Date: April 15 2013 06:32 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 2

I can see that there will be quite a few flashbacks that will fill in the blanks.



Author's Response:

Yes yes quite a few :3

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Date: April 10 2013 07:08 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 1

Wow is all i have at the moment.

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Date: April 10 2013 07:07 am

Title: Episode 1: Ch 3

Apparent feelings that are clouded by life can be a real pain for anyone.  At one time or another, there comes a time when we feel the need to make a life change.

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Date: April 07 2013 03:17 am



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