lovely story cant wait for your update:)
Reviewer: mwesigye Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2016 07:46 am
Welcome back. Great update!
Reviewer: heather Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 01 2016 12:48 pm
whoa. I love Bane and all, but he was DEAD wrong for treating Nemesis like that in the beginning of this chapter. I wouldn't have blamed her if she had stayed mad at him forever (because I know I would). I won't lie though, that 'make-up' sex scene was hot, though. lol
Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 28 2016 11:59 pm
Thank you so much for updating. I missed this story.
Reviewer: Karen Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 28 2016 12:23 am
no review ...just glad your back
Reviewer: ls Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 27 2016 11:20 pm
Well damn. Can I have Bane too lol
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2016 10:53 am
Wow... I'm still not sure about how to feel about this voice in her head. It doesn't seem normal at all. I feel like that voice is going to cause some bad things to happen sooner or later. I think that Bane isn't asking enough questions and it's going to kick him in the ass in the end. He still needs to kill his so-called sister. I don't trust her at all.
Update soon. I almost forgot what was going on in this story. Keep it up
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2016 06:28 am
idk how I skipped this chapter, but man am I glad that I let my curiosity get the best of me and decided to double-check/check out this chapter. Poor Nem. Damn, I hope that her hearing that voice in her head doesn't lead to her doing something bad. I hope that things don't get bad for her and Bane. And I hope that Bane can help her. Great job!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 02:51 pm
YAY!!!!!
I'm SO happy that you updated. This is such a great story. One of my favs. And this chapter was great. I hope that things continue to get better for Bane and Nem. But I don't think that either of them should ever (at least fully) trust that Nyssa. She's a mess. smh. lol Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 12:53 pm
Welcome back!!
That was excellent.!
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 12:32 pm
Ohhh...this story has took an unexpected, but exciting turn!!!! Can't wait to read the next update!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2016 12:19 am
I hope Nemesis will be okay and she's not falling off on the deep end. I kinda think her change in behavior may be due to the healing water she was put in. Maybe there was something extra in the water? XD
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Sheyahne Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 02 2016 06:36 am
Oh shit... What in the world did that damn child do now? I told you to get those answers Bane. Talk to the Nurse and then talk to your so called sister. She just needs to be killed. She is a complete waste of time. You spend more time fixing the shit she messes up than working on whatever you planned.. Like seriously!
Update soon!!
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2016 02:57 am
Not unnecessary Bane. You still need to get those answers from the Nurse. She will crack. I have no doubt that his sister did this for her own selfish reasons.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2016 02:43 am
I don't know whether to be happy or questionable. I'm glad that she is improving but why did she do that for Nem? She made it very clear that she didn't like her. So why even go to those lengths to help her? Or is it her own selfish way of protecting herself and getting back into her brother's good graces?
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2016 02:37 am
Damn, she is no joke. Don't mess with the scientist!!! Did this damn girl inject herself with the venom??? Oh Lord
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2016 02:30 am
What in the holy fuck. How did they know to get to her in time? Now she has to deal with this. How did she know about all of this with both Orders? At least she was truthful about who Bane really is. She isn't completely dick whipped. LOl. Really Lee? I truly want your dumb ass to die.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2016 02:04 am
Damn, I thought Bane had gotten there in time. So who has her now? What in the world is going on. How did this Valley guy find Nem and Bruce needs to come off the location of the bastard. He is, afterall, pretending to be you while he kills people.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2016 01:47 am
So this Batman is a fake... Interesting. Why is he after Bane then? Why did he drop her off there? That's just cruel.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2015 04:02 am
So is there someting wrong with his heart and the venom is keeping him alive? Barsad is upset because he liked you dummy! Now he knows that's not going to happen or he will die trying to get at you.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2015 03:37 am
Now that's how you apologize to a lady. LOl.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2015 03:19 am
Lol. Why did he just kiss her like that? And she let him! Hell he still kidnapped you girl! Why is he mad? They were just training. There's nothing wrong with that, unless the only thing he saw was them on the wall. LOl. Uh oh
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2015 03:03 am
Oh Jesus. Why? Let it go
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2015 12:48 am
Wow... Why does Bane even need the venom anyway? It is keeping him alive or something?
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2015 12:41 am
Oh wow... Why was she creating venom? And she was a mistress. Shame.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2015 12:28 am