Reviews For Chocolate
Title: Alone

Oh my.! Please update soon.! I really like this story.! That's good that Loki finally opened up. && I can't believe Noni really killed someone.! I just can't.!



Author's Response:

Not sure if you've read chapter 15 yet, but I know the shock. It shocked me to write it! O_O

Reviewer: weluvjb92 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 05:12 am

Title: Alone

I liked this chapter. I've been waiting for Loki to open up but I was definitely not expecting Noni's reply. Looking forward to the next!



Author's Response:

My boyfriend is reading it as well. He said her response messed him up for the rest of the night, ROFL. Stay tuned ^_^

Reviewer: sha2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 03:39 am

Title: Alone

This chapter humanized Loki.  Noni, I know didn't kill someone indiscriminately or in cold bold.  It had to be a matter of life and death.  I can't wait to find out what happened.  Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

That was my ultimate goal, to show Loki in a light that he doesn't show often. Someone capable of remorse and compassion. ^_^

Thanks!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 01:12 am

Title: Alone

This was a powerful chapter I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. :)

Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 10:58 pm

Title: Alone

I am still with you! I love this story so much that I re-read it while I wait for an update. I love the way the story is flowing and the direction your taking it. I only wish you updated more, and the chapters were longer (GREEDY FAN), but I'll take it anyway you give it.

P.S.  I'm not sure if you're thinking about making Noni pregnant (soon or at all), but I would love to see that happen so both her and Loki will know they have family and someone who truly love them no matter what.



Author's Response:

Oh wow, thank you! I'm a swing cook so sometimes I work double shifts. And girl, I get so sleepy I nearly pass out on the stove. LOL. But I try to update as often as possible. Chapter 15 is the longest I've written. I try to keep the chapters in theme with the title...though I title the chapters after I've written them. And I just cut off where I think the story is going to flow into a timelapse or another scene--for the most part. I've been trying to challenge myself though and write more detail.

Who knows what's to come!

Reviewer: SunshineChica73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 09:32 pm

Title: Long Live The King

Hopefully things will be greatbetween the two. I hope the dark voice doesn't cause too many problems



Author's Response:

Dun dun dunnnn. Doncha just love suspense? :)

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 04:58 pm

Title: Long Live The King

Amazing story, I read it again just to hold me over until you posted the next chapter. Great work, please don't stop! lol (:



Author's Response:

Can't stop. Won't stop. LOL, thanks for the support. ^_^

Reviewer: SimplyMia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2013 03:37 am

Title: Long Live The King

Dun dun dun!  Oh, the plot thickens just like I like.  Loving this story.  It just gets richer and richer.  I can't believe this is your first story.  REALLY?  lol  Keep 'em coming, hun.  This story is enchanting!

Reviewer: Reese Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 06:12 am

Title: Just a Taste...

Still reading your story and I still love it!!!! Best I have read in a long time.

Reviewer: sha2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 05:55 am

Title: Chocolate

I totally think you should be getting more reviews cuz this story is just awesome. I Have always been a huge fan of Loki and though I was skeptical at first I think you really do justice to his character well and Noni is really likeable too. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work. You are really talented!

Reviewer: sha2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 05:34 am

Title: Long Live The King

The past always has a way of creeping back tp the center of his mind.  Loki will always have his inner demons that continue to pick at his sanity.  Noni can only do so much to keep that dormant, but it is only asleep.  What will happen when that inner voice gains more strengh the more he thinks of his life.



Author's Response:

The voice may very well turn out to be helpful. Who knows?

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 03:07 am

Title: Long Live The King

A God with a psychosis is a scary thing!!  I hate that she is hurt by Danny pushing her away but Noni you will have to let him go as he wants what you can't give him.  The sad part is that he thought that he had a chance even though she never gave any indication of feeling more than friendship.  With the lose of his son I don't see him getting over his hurt of you choosing Loki anytime soon.  Great update!!



Author's Response:

Like Hermione of Harry Potter said; hearing voices never bodes well...or does it? It could be helpful.

Danny is really struggling. I hope he doesn't let his demons walk him down the wrong path...

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 02:52 am

Title: Long Live The King

Awww snap now shit about to get real I see



Author's Response:

LMFAO! Love this.

Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 02:01 am

Title: Snow

i can clearly see that Danny is going to be a problem and i know that this is a story about Loki but i don't see how he can still blame Thor for everything that has happened to him.

Reviewer: JjongIsMyBias Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2013 11:05 pm

Title: The List

I just found this story and I must say it's so entertaining...charming.  I just love how you've captured Loki's essence but also given him layers.  Noni is wonderful, and Grimm is my Dawg.  Lol.  I just had to throw that in their. Hope you keep writing.  I can't wait to see what's in store for them all.



Author's Response:

Yay! Lol, that was my whole intention. I didn't just want to write Loki as an evil mischief maker, but give him a personality. And I also didn't want to make him all sunshine and rainbows either, because that's completely unrealistic. Grimm is such an awesome lil dog. I think I want a mini-doberman now. lol.

Reviewer: Reese Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06 2013 01:41 am

Title: Need

That was smoking hot!  Loki put it on her! 



Author's Response:

Lol, thanks! Loki might not be very experienced--but he's very arrogant and he IS a god. That combination is sure to smolder in any situation. ;)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 03:41 pm

Title: The List

That   was amazingly hot and sexy! Loki and Noni need each other as they were both lonely.  My heart goes out to Danny for the of his son Jake. He is pushing away from Noni who is truly his friend all because she doesn't return his feelings. Jake wouldn't want that for you Danny!  Loving this story!



Author's Response:

I assume you're referring to the chapter Need. Yeah, I was listening to Un-Thinkable by Alicia Keys as I wrote it. ;)

 

Danny is just...well, we'll see what happens.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 03:29 pm

Title: The List

I feel so bad for Danny I can't even imagine losing a child.  I have two boys and though they are 20 and 18 now they are still my babies. No parent ever wants to bury their child.

Loki and Noni and even little Grimm appear to be getting closer.  I wonder would Loki understand if Noni put everything out their shot maybe he should do the same with her.

Thnak you chica for the update.



Author's Response:

Wow. I'm 22 myself. I can't imagine it either.

And Noni and Loki are going to get closer. Sorry for taking so long to respond!  Thanks for reviewing and reading. :)

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 10:23 am

Title: The List

Her feelings of lose are in reason.  She only wants to make the best of every momeny she has.  Everyone that she cares about are always leaving her to pick up the broken pieces of her lifr.  At least Loki is there for her, for now. Any update is a blessing.

 

 

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 08:23 am

Title: The List

I know Danny is going through something but there is something about him that doesn't feel right...



Author's Response:

I know what you mean. We'll see why that is soon enough. Perhaps there's something amiss, or perhaps he's simply just hurting right now.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 06:51 am

Title: The List

Omg Danny is scaing me like seriously.



Author's Response:

There's a reason for that! It's coming, I promise.

Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 05:54 am

Title: Mini-Midgard

This is the first Loki fanfic that I've read and you definitely have me intrigued. And I'm loving Noni and her down to earth self - I can't wait til I get a chance to read more!

Reviewer: artsyChica Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 04:20 pm

Title: Flashing Lights

Poor Jake great chapter

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 06:39 am

Title: Just a Taste...

oohlala!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 03:12 am

Title: Granny Smith Apples

I luv this chapter Loki is sucha hoot!lol

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 02:56 am



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