Many thanks to your boyfriend times infinity, and you for finding it in you for the two for one update. It seems that Loki is quite good at bringing out the worst in everyone. The kiss was an unexpected spur of the moment as well as inner desires coming to the surface. Any woman would need to cool off after a passionate exchange like that. The fact that all the chocolate portion was gone was a clear sign that someone really loves chocolate. Thank you so much and am looking forward for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for all your wonderful reviews. They mean sooooooo much. I honestly just want people to love reading this story as much as I love writing it. And yes, Mr. Laufeyson is quite fond of chocolate. ;)
Reviewer: reader101 Signed
[Report This]Date: April 16 2013 05:45 am
Loki and his ego lol! good updates!
Author's Response:
He's got a BIG ego! ;)
Thanks!
Reviewer: kitten84 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 03:41 am
Giiiiiiiirl, this story it too HOT! I luv me some Loki and this is just the kind of thing I like to read. I'm curious about that Danny guy cuz he don't seem too kosher right now. I feel like I need to go cool down too! Update SOON!
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks for the review! New chap's up now.
Reviewer: AnnaNicole Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 02:46 am
I love Loki ate all of the chocolate out of the neapolitan ice cream. He doesn't seem to remember that he as no where to go. Noni is not to be triffled with Loki had better recognize. And that kiss was wow!!!
Author's Response:
Bahahah! Like a fat boy right? And yeah, Mr. better learn to bite his tongue. Noni is a litte spit-fire.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 02:32 am
Loki has got it bad and for a mortal none-the-less!! You had better recognize Loki, Noni is the one for you!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 12:54 am
Loki is feeling Noni and Noni is feeling Loki there are going to be some good times ahead. Terrence is too much and little annoying but he does provide the comic relief of the story. Grimm is appears has given his seal of approval to Loki, however Danny ain't happy. Me likey!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 12:44 am
It is clear that they are starting to develop feeling for one another. Leave it to a gay male to be spot on about Loki clouding her mind. Noni is a designer, well that explains alot. Seeing Loki being fasinated with the snow was the cherry on top of the sundae. Now i know that Loki's feels that he can be with her and that she would accept despite ont knowing the full story. Of course life has a way of blowing storm clouds over the skies. Danny seeing them togther is a sign of more drama in the wings.
Author's Response:
Yeah, considering he's the son of a Frost Giant, snow and ice are kinda his thing. Sorry for responding so late!
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 09:41 pm
So happy your going to be up dating a-lot...can't wait for the next one. :)
Author's Response:
Me either! The feedback has been helpful. Thank you.
Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 12:46 pm
It is clear how he feels about her and i think it is keeping his mind of of his other life even for a moment. Seeing him react to earthly customs and food in like seeing a toddler learning to to walk, it is priceless. How will this affect him and what does this mean for his ambitions? Seeing Loki expressing this feelings and seeing his inner thoughts reminds me that he is still a man, immortal or not. Noni seems unaware of Loki and his unknown god nature even with the small details.
Author's Response:
It is very clear, though at times he doesn't want it to be. His internal struggle is interesting to write. Thanks.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 08:00 am
hah, during most of this I was just thinking 'poor Loki. Come here let me hug you!'
Author's Response:
Bahahahahahaha! And call him "puddin".
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 06:16 am
Loved the update!
Author's Response:
Glad you did! Thank you!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 05:39 am
God do I love this...Loki is just to funny and poor baby...he really needs some good loveing.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he has the capability to be a sweetie. It's just hidden DEEP under a lot of pride and arrogance. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 05:35 am
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! For updating this fic so soon :) I am loving this Loki-awesomeness! I forgotten how sexy Loki is. I can't wait for the next update and more of the Loki :)
Author's Response:
Not a problem, I'm really glad you're enjoying it as I am having soooooo much fun writing it. Thanks.
Reviewer: FaithMax Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 03:00 am
Loki is too cute. I'm living this story.
Author's Response:
He is! Thank you.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2013 10:08 pm
I love Loki much... so happy to see this story ..uhg I can't wait for a up :)
Author's Response:
Yay, thank you! Next chapter's up now. :D
Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2013 06:20 pm
Hell yeah Loki and some thick sista love! lol I have a soft spot for Loki and his sad brokenness. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I do too. Thanks for your review and new chap's up now! ^_^
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2013 09:00 am
I am loving the this fic!!! I can't wait until the next update :)!! However, if I was Noni I would have punched Loki for trying to strangle my dog.
Author's Response:
She kicked him in the face for it! Next chapter's up, thanks for your review!!
Reviewer: FaithMax Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 14 2013 06:02 am
Loved the update!
Author's Response:
So glad you did! Stay tuned, new chap's up!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2013 03:43 am
This is a side of Loki that few ever see and in a way it is refrteshing to see him with a kind tone. Noni has no idea who he is and perhaps it is for the best for now. I wonder how long it will last until that need to prove himself comes full circle. How will it affect his feelings for Noni and her good deeds toward him despite his strange appearence.
Author's Response:
Stay tuned to find out. ;)
I love writing this fic. Like I said so someone else, Loki is extremely complex. It's interesting to see the multiple sides to his character.
Thanks for the review--again! ^_^
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2013 03:11 am
Interesting looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, hope you enjoy.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 11:31 pm
Not exactly the best first impression but then again this is not the typical story. Loki apparentley will have to face what he is running from whether he likes it or not. Noni is gutsy for allowing a complete stranger stay with her even after the attempt to strangle her dog to death. His strange appearence would confuse anyone on earth and it is only a matter of time unitl reality rears it's ugly head.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't want to give too much away but looks can be deceiving is what I can say. His appearance is definitely odd. Stay tuned for more. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 08:21 am
I have yet to read a story on this site that gives Loki's side seeing him as a man that has his own inner demons. So far i am intrigued. Everyone at one time or another feels that they need to get away. He may be surprised at what he sees and learns about earth(Midgard to gods).
Author's Response:
Yeah, they always tend to leave that out. Loki is a hugely complex character. Glad you are interested, and thanks for your review.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 08:09 am
Interesting start! More please.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Chapter 2's up! ^_^
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 05:16 am
I love Loki, even though he is bad!
Author's Response:
I love him too! He's not all bad, he's just...misguided. He has a mischevious streak but it's complex. O think he acts out as more of a way to prove himself and for attention than actual malice. He's a tortured soul. Thanks for the review! <3
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 04:41 am
Good start. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks
Author's Response:
Yay! Thank YOU for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 02:18 am