Title: Chapter 1

love it more hot

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 04:31 am

Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!! That was enjoyable and the twist at the end had me breathing out fresh air!!!  He was husband; SWEET!!!!! To heighten my pleasure, her husband and hump buddy was Danny "Scotty" Piña!!! There definitely need to be more stories starring this sexy specimen!!!!



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Really happy you liked the story

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 06:35 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed the story! Nice twist.

 

 

Reviewer: adt2700 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 01:23 pm

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Thank G m not the only one confused. Loved the story twas cute but who is Richard if Robert is the husnand?

Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 01:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

Cute! Loved the surprise ending

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 06:21 am

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Thought the story was good until the end. The end did not make sense. How could it have been her husband? If its her husband, why was he worried about her being hurt and her having to explain to her husband? Why would she be worried about how her dishevelled appearance would look to her husband? I think the idea was good but the execution didn't quite work. Too many inconsistencies. Perhaps, when you reread the story, these inconsistencies can be taken out. Keep writing though, yu're very talented.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 01:10 am

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There was already a story similar to this though.

Still good. 



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Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 10:37 pm

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I loved it, the ending was a nice surprise too lol!!!!!



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Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 09:57 pm

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Good story! Surprising ending!



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Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 08:47 pm

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Okay, I don't get it. So it was her husband all along? So the man she had been fucking was her husband? I'm a little lost.



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Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 08:40 pm

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I really want Mia divorced and childless!  



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Why? LOL it was her husband.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 07:33 pm

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I really liked this. OMG they're hot and sexy couple. The ending was very suprising. Great job

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Reviewer: CestianiDauphin1 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 07:00 pm



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