Just read this story again update love your workReviewer: Faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 09 2015 02:52 am
Ugh!! Please update. I know you're probably not even thinking about this story now. But if by chance you read this I think this is good story. I would like to see more character development with Ali. I really liked it. Good job!!!Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 12:23 am
That whole last part had an uncomfortable incestuous feel to it. You should include that in the warnings
I don't know what part you're talking about. There was no incestuous intent. Perhaps close siblings bother you, but there is nothing I can do about. I will pay closer attention to their "sibling love" however. Unfortunately, I cannot add that to the warnings because only you have this problem and it was also wasn't intentional. Thank you for a review.
I don't know what part you're talking about. There was no incestuous intent. Perhaps close siblings bother you, but there is nothing I can do about. I will pay closer attention to their "sibling love" however. Unfortunately, I cannot add that to the warnings because only you have this problem and it was also wasn't intentional. Thank you for a review.Reviewer: KayMay Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 10:58 pm
love this story read it 2 time now update soonReviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 07 2013 11:00 pm
I feel terrible that you leave me hanging like this. I feel on edge because I'm hanging off this cliff. Update soon, then I will feel loads better.Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 08:57 am
happy u are back love the story more soon don't make us wait update soon 5*****Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 04:51 am
You don't know how much I love your stories and how I'm always so pleased when see that you've posted an update. Love your characters and your castings, you always make us indentify with them.love it.
I hope they get back together Thomas loves her but he just lost his mind for a bit, but you never know what you lost till it's goneReviewer: Judahlove Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 09:36 pm
I would not talk to him. What does he have to talk about. He said all he had to say with his friend Jeremiah. Okay, I digress. Let him talk, but it should change nothing. I know people should get over words, but those words coming from the one you love with all your heart? His words were an attack on who she is as a person, something she can never change. She can not stop being black. She can lose weight, we all can do that, but the main issue was her color and the size did not help according to Thomas and he does not want his peers to get wind of this, but that doesn't stop him or his peers from from doing what Thomas began to do on a nightly basis. For a man not to want Ali, he sure did worship her body like he wanted it all. Typical. The ONLY reason he wants to talk now is because he MIGHT be feeling a little guilty. He's a bastard. Ali is NOT some dirty little secret and the way Thomas has showed us so far, that is all she would ever be. I can totally picture him getting married and still seeing her and Ali would be okay with it because she just loves him to pieces; what an idiot. I love Ali, I do, but Thomas is not the one and if he is he has a WORLD to make up for.
Now, on Thomas's side, he has one, even though I do not like him so much, he wants his job to go to the next level and though he might have feelings for Ali, he wants his job and feels as though if he would go public with Ali, that would vanish in thin air. Everything he has worked for out the window because he's with some fat, black chick (even though Ali is not fat in my opinion). I think he might be getting considered for partner, I haven't read the beginning chapters in awhile. That is a BIG deal and he thinks/knows with that comes a certain lifestyle and who you present to that lifestyle matters. Now I do not think ALL corporate firms are like this, but if a person does not fit a certain mold, you're out, white or black, but black gives you a first class ticket. Anyway, Thomas does not want to give up his livelihood for Ali. He could find a job somewhere else, I am certain, but it might not be the job he wants. That's if his firm does not blackball him for even considering Ali. That would be taking it WAY personal, but it happens.
I thought I was pissed being Ali, but Thomas as a whole set of other problems going in a different direction and while I can bring all my morals out for Ali, which I will continue to do, Thomas has a decision to make. Gosh I do not want to take up for him, I still do not like him at all, I am just trying to look at things from his perspective. Great update!!!Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 03:47 pm
Damn what an introduction! Great job, you made me hate Thomas and Jeremiah and I am highly impressed with the strength that Ali just showed. I love how you just jumped into the story allowing us to see the reasoning for his dating Ali in the first place. Those two dudes are assholes of the highest extemes! Great start!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 02:30 pm