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Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Great start! Please continue this story.

 Reviewer: tymes3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 03:28 am
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

please update this story

 Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 04:24 pm
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

So was this the last chapter?

 Reviewer: Babygirl Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 09:08 pm
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Please Update

 Reviewer: livelove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2013 06:40 am
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

I love the way you are writing this...it's so deep.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 11:55 pm
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

wow love it more

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Date: May 26 2013 08:25 pm
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Great chapter!

 Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 06:20 pm
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Honestly, I wouldn't mind if Thomas did get a good beating from James. Murder would be extreme, but I'm all in favour of a good ass-kicking!

 Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 06:05 pm
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Great story so far . Sorry it's taken me so long to read it . More pleae.

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 05:07 pm
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

thomas better ruuuun and hiiiide because james is out to kill him, lool! so glad that ali now has someone she can rely and lean onto through this because thomas is just what james said - a coward...! thanks for the update!!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 10:39 am
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Good gosh, I'm devouring this like a Dororthy Koomson novel!! 

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 10:10 am
Title: Grief Is A Complicated Business

I hope Ali pulls through this and realizes she doesn't need the worthless excuse for a father that Thomas could turn out to be. 

Thanks for the update!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 08:02 am
Title: Those In Hiding

I hate when insecurity enters into creativity, it is a killer, which makes me glad that you're doing something to get over it.

 Reviewer: Die A Mouse Death Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2013 09:27 pm
Title: Those In Hiding

Girl, No problem at all. Just continue to get back in your mojo & do what makes you happy and I'll be just as happy :)

 Reviewer: Jkelly14 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 08:39 pm
Title: Those In Hiding

Girl, No problem at all. Just continue to get back in your mojo & do what makes you happy and I'll be just as happy :)

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Date: May 19 2013 08:37 pm
Title: When One Door Closes

Yeah, it definitely makes me want to read more !

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Date: May 19 2013 02:22 am
Title: When One Door Closes

WOW... I am.. just wow. I can't believe Thomas. How can you love someone and be ashamed to even be seen with them because of color? Really?! He is one dumbass.. Poor Ali and lil baby Ali. They deserve better, I want more.

 

Please post more soon :)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 09:51 am
Title: When One Door Closes

I think the problem, ur in securities with ur stories, lies with ur irregular updates. U write excellent beginning chapters. But by the time u feel like writing, readers have lost interest. Work on making timely updates. You have everything it takes to make a good story, it just takes way too long for you to finish them becuz you won't update



Author's Response:

As much as I appreciate your review, I don't find it helpful or hurtful. Unfortunately I cannot update as regularly as some writers on this site or as infrequently as others because I have a life that is very stressful and busy. I work 2 jobs and I attend school full time with no car and I'm the only working member of my household of 3, so if I can't update as frequently as expected, I don't feel bad simply because I have to put my energy elsewhere. I write to escape my life, I don't and I never have, wanted writing to become a stressful part of my life because there's simply no enjoyment for that. If people lose interest I'm sorry, but perhaps they never liked it. There are plenty of stories that haven't been updated in months with no word from an author that I patiently wait for them to update. It was never the reading that had me self conscious, but the writing itself and it's outward perception as a well-written piece. Thank you for your review. 

 Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 08:58 am
Title: Those In Hiding

Congrats on 'finding your voice' again. This was a good start to what I supsect will be a great read.

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Date: May 16 2013 07:56 pm
Title: When One Door Closes

great start please finsh.

 Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 03:29 pm
Title: Those In Hiding

I saw that you took the story down from this site... So I'm reading it on THe Sweetest Taboo LML, it's in the Lasped Fiction section. Hopefully you can get it from there and continue your amazing writing. If there's one thing I love about you it's that your stories are real and believable... Even The Fortress,please bring this back as well. As you can see I'm a longtime fan. Don't worry about your writing, as long you get the basic if what your thinking on paper or the computer screen, you'll be alright. God's Blessings. 



Author's Response:

OMG i forgot I posted on TST!!!

 

you are an incredible life saver. I can't even....<3 oh wow

 

the fortress would have to be totally reconstructed if I re-did it, but its a goal of mine. 

 

I can't put into words how grateful I am. You're so amazing. I can't believe I forgot

 Reviewer: Jkelly14 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 05:48 am
Title: When One Door Closes

That poor baby is going to be half-asshole. ;_; Ugh, how old are Thomas and Jeremiah? 15?! That's some knuckle-headed high school jock behaviour! >_<

 Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 05:13 pm
Title: When One Door Closes

I'm so sorry to hear that you were doubting your talents, as my mama says "The devil is a liar".

I've been waiting for you to update your other stories, but don't like to go on about it because I know that you and the other talented authors on this site have lives outside of enternataining us.lol.

This story has me hooked already and I hope that you update soon 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 10:55 am
Title: Those In Hiding

I felt so bad for poor Ali. Jeremiah and Thomas are assholes. Media, society and corporate dogs!

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 09:34 am
Title: Those In Hiding

I hate people like these two....they think they are so powerful, when they are so weak. They're the media's little bitches. The girl should leave him. 



Author's Response:

Yes they are and I hope in the coming chapters or shorts they will see this and change, but eh..you never know with people 

 Reviewer: Sleek Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 06:21 am


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