While commendable, Bill's decision to adopt Jordan was a little premature wasn't it? I can't wait to read what happened in the years they were separated.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 12:48 pm
She thinks her sister tried to kill her. I love a good plot thrust into a story.
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 09:46 am
She was never reunited with Jordan? Oh woe is me! I want the sisters back together, was!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 02:50 am
Thank God Jordan is alive. When will they be reunited? How old is Felix? Is Bill gay? Good stuff!
Author's Response:
Lol no Bill is a happily married man to a woman
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 02:45 am
Interesting start! What happened to Jordan? Did Bill adopt her? Will Felix and Jordan reunite?
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 12:29 am
You just had to go and make me cry!! Great beginning! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 08:19 pm
Felix that was not nice, don't let that child fall. I am really not liking Felix right now your sister is all you have left. What caused the flooding? More please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 01:26 pm
Love it! Everything about this makes me want more to read.
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 01:23 pm
Great start! What happens to Jordan? And how will Felix handle it? Will they get off the roof safe and alive? Update soon please.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 04:23 am