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Title: I

*grins* Oh yes. This is good.
I also like the change in of the title, very fitting.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And yes the previous title was extremely clunky.

 Reviewer: LadySade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2013 04:34 am
Title: II

Enjoying please continue. I wonder what Zari is and why Niels did not have an affect on her or his spell did not work on her.

Thank you for sharing.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 10:00 am
Title: II

This just keeps getting better with each sentence.  Two non human males on a dark artist the other a dark that is yet to be determined.  Megan took a step to far and she was clearly punished for her rude attitude.  Neils has a deep curiousity with Zari that is yet to be explained.  And Zari has made it clear that she is not swayed by money or looks.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 04:56 am
Title: I

So far all attention is hooked.  My hunger to read more is not sated.  I am curious of what will happen next.  The jealous beauty with that wants to rid herself of a new face that steals the other mens attention.  And this man in the pinstriped suit that has a bit of a darkness over him is music to my senstive ears.  A dark fic is just what i have wanted to read.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'll try to make this the best dark fic that I can! 

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 04:19 am
Title: II

Ha! I caught the Black Butler line. great start and I can't wait to read more soon.

Author's Response:

I know but I just couldn't resist. Sebastian is just too appealing.  But I am forever a Cladue fan. ;)



Author's Response:

I know but I just couldn't resist. Sebastian is just too appealing.  But I am forever a Cladue fan. ;)

 Reviewer: Raynee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 06:58 pm
Title: I

I love this fic. VAMPIRES YEAH!!!! I cannot wait to read more.

 Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 06:55 pm
Title: I

So you have thrown Vampires into the mix, who knew?  I am still wondering how Megan met Neils and why her crazy ass amuses him? I love Zari she is not as meek as Megan would have Neils believe. Megan needs go down in flames and soon! Fabulous!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 04:59 pm
Title: II

This story is very interesting. It's different and I like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I like writing stories that are out there even if that means a smaller fanbase/readership. Its all I can write successfully.

 Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 04:50 pm
Title: II

it's official - i'm hooked! it's been so long since i last read a vampire story and i have missed that so thank you for GPR - i look forward to the next update!!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 11:01 am
Title: II

This will be intresting.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 07:44 am
Title: II

desparate do stupid things...i am beginning to enjoy your book.  Please continue

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 06:21 am
Title: I

Mmmmm. Really Megan? You're willing to murder just to gain the attention of men who could give two sh*ts about you, much less what you think? -_-
You're wrong girl! You're wrong! ...And Crazy!
Great start, cannot wait to read more :)

 Reviewer: LadySade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2013 04:37 am
Title: I

Intrigued. Please continue.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 09:23 pm
Title: I

Megan is cray cray as she wants kill a woman who she sees as competition instead of working harder.  I wouldn't mind Megan dying as it would serve her right. It would karmic justice! Me likey! How many times has Neils gotten rid of Megan's competition?  Will we find out how Neil and Megan know each other?  I am already salivating over this story please update soon!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 02:22 pm
Title: I

oh hell yeah...great start! look very much forward to more!!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 12:05 pm
Title: I

Interesting start I can't wait to see where you take this story. 

Thank you for sharing

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 11:43 am
Title: I

Hmmmm.... Sounds promising.

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 10:50 am
Title: I

Nice beginning

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 09:14 am


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