Reviews For Loving My Teacher
Title: Chapter 2

Yep she's a high schooler, hiw disgusting. Chester the child molester!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2016 12:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I don't like these two akready and yes Lina you are his sideline ho!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2016 12:05 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Lina is stupid! Why would Chester go to jail us Lina under the age if consent? I really don't like Luna and Chester makes my eye twitch. Is Lina's dumb ass not using birth control herself? That child is dumb, Chester is not leaving his wife for you.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 01:35 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I love the theme of your story, but I think it needs to be more deepened. You can give us more insight of Lina's inner thoughts, this way she'll appear less bratty and superficial to the reader. If we can read more about the character's deeper thoughts, it'll become easier to figure out their nature and give us a valid reason to like, get attached, despise, hate, find them touching... And I think your story needs to have longer chapters and more descriptive parts. This story came from your creativity, so you know the settings... But as a reader, we need details, even the insignificant ones, to imagine every scene, like how the place they're currently in looks like, how they move in the space, the expression on their faces, their outfit if that's important in the action, the weather, their reactions... there are so many to say, and it can be done in few words if you are not into description. I think that this story needs narrative parts, clearly separated from the dialogue parts to avoid any confusion. So yes, I love the theme of your story, I refuse to judge your characters based on this short chapters, but it's hard for me to have an opinion at this moment. I'm not judging you, but just impartially giving you my opinion as a mere reader. I really want to read more, so thanx for sharing.

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 12:43 pm

Title: Chapter 1

My my.  I cringed reading Lina.  She is so clueless. This man is not going to leave his wife for her.  She should be getting an education rather than disrespecting her teacher. SMH   If she doesn't get her act together, she's going to be another statistic, a woman with no husband, no education and a bunch of kids continuing the cycle of ignorance!  

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 12:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2

The story is well written but I am having real trouble with story.. However, I probably will continue to read you story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 12:10 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Those two discuss me. I hope Chester wife divorces him and take s him to the cleaner.

Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Luna you are a sideline ho, Chester is married which I am Sure that you knew before you had sex the first time.  What does she expect from Chester, to leave his wife and marry her?  So dumb! Good start.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 02:28 pm



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