Title: Chapter 2

I really like this story...looking forward to seeing how they get to know each other and their families' reaction. 

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN................

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 08:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I likey, l likey! 

Ruby and Xander I will say it again...I like me a big man!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 19 2013 02:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

Love Me a Big Man! Especially if he can lift me up! 

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Date: August 19 2013 01:54 am

Title: The Cast

Cutie pies! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2013 01:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

Xander is smooth, he said"I hope to run into your ex-husband one day". His response to her question of why was,"So that I could thank him"!  That right there makes him a keeper!!  Can I have my own Xander? Please?!

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Date: July 20 2013 06:02 am

Title: Chapter 2

oh no!!! They were so close =/

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2013 05:49 am

Title: Chapter 2

Colour me intrigued!

Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter, I like him.. send one to Miami..:)

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like it, great start and good characters.

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Date: July 19 2013 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Everything happens for a reasons whether its goond or bad.  The car ride is awkward but no surprise there.  Now thereis no doubt that they feel something.  Once the divorce is final, Ruby will be free to live her life and find someone that will treat her like a queen.  A true man is someone that respects a woman just like he respects his mother.  Xander is attrative but he also has the morals as well, a bonus for any woman.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 11:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1

The way the plot is set is already a yes for me.  Not all relationships work out that is just life.  Ruby is a nice woman that seems at first to be a people pleaser.  Her mother sounds controlling and closed minded.  The fact that she was going to go to the reunion without her husband is a step forward to being true to herself.  She seems to be put in others shadows with no regards that is is her own person.  As for the car break down well whats done is done.  Good thing Andrew happened to be driving on the road.  Of course anyone is leary of getting into a strangers car, that is human nature.  There is a clear attraction from Ruby and Andrew seems like a good man with a head on his shoulders.  This eill be interesting.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 10:54 pm

Title: Chapter 2

lol..I love Ruby's attitude, it is refreshing to read about semi-strong woman

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 10:37 pm

Title: The Cast

Hot. Steamy. GIVE ME MORE! I love it!

Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 10:37 pm

Title: The Cast

So far i like what i see.  Not overly good looking buy still shows that they still have substance.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 10:33 pm

Title: The Cast

So far, so good !

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Oh Xander is such a sweetheart! I was smiling the entire time I read his lines. I'm so glad that he's a gentleman and the fact that you gave both him and Ruby morals. Great update! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Ooh this story is gonna be good.  I want to read  more. ...yep am greedy! !

Thank you for posting. 

Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 09:12 pm

Title: The Cast

Beautiful cast!

Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 08:55 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Love this update!

Reviewer: zoe zoey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 07:45 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Yay! Love this! I'm glad they didn't have sex and he's a gentleman and didn't take her

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 07:41 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Aw, why did it have to rain on their parade?

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 07:34 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ohhhh....I REALLY like this beginning.  Xander sounds sexy, charming, and good looking.  Ruby doesn't stand a chance. LOL.  And he doesn't sound like someone easily pushed around by perhaps...her mother or other family or friends of Ruby.  Nope.  He sounds like my kind of man.  Can't wait to read more. 

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 06:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oooooo I love it !

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 03:46 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I really like the start.It would be real fun to see Ruby's mother's reaction to Xander.And ohh how will Xander react? Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 02:42 pm



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