Reviews For Veiled Threat
Title: Chapter 1 - Destiny and Demise

This is shaping up to be a wild read. Can't wait for more, I'm so excited!



Author's Response:

Working on chapter 2 now and I get more excited with each passing word! Stay tuned :)

Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2013 02:24 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Destiny and Demise

This is well written story, I love how you separated the dialogue. I love the relationship between to the two roommates those two are funny.  I think that I will love Corwin!!!  Great start!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am trying to keep it easy to read/see. Glad you think the girls are funny..this is the kind of stuff I have going on in my head on a daily basis. I think that Corwin is going to become an odd ball combo of my hubby and his friends lol

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2013 05:48 am



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