Reviews For Veiled Threat
Title: Chapter 6 - I Want Your Body

Casey is quite the presumptuous bastard isn’t he?  And a liar too! He had the audacity to just…show up at a woman’s residence unannounced and uninvited and he expected her to be what…? Welcoming? Flattered that he’s interested in her? Man- please! Not only that, he precedes to deceive Nikki into thinking Leigha consented to said visit. Wow…the nerve of this guy…dude is really creepy.


Why the change of m. o.?  Is the investigation getting too close for comfort? What’s with the veils, what’s their significance? Does the killer view his ‘work’ as a form of salvation, rescuing these women from a life of deprivation or depravity? It’s so very interesting and I'm none the wiser as to whom the killer could be. Love the intrigue and suspense.


Still loving the story, still captivated by your writing style and attention to detail. Can’t wait for the one-on-one between Nikki and Quinn.


Great job!



Author's Response:

Yay! So glad the hear/read this :) Nikki and Quinn coming soon!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 6 - I Want Your Body

Casey is creepy he just shows up at her housexand lies  about Leigha xsending him over.  Quinn will ber saving grace and he's hot too! Yep don't like Casey and Nicole's  spidy sense should be tinvling!



Author's Response:

Is it weird that I'm excited you don't like him? Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2013 03:36 pm

Title: Chapter 6 - I Want Your Body

Casey is a great character!   Thanks for the update.   



Author's Response:

You are quite welcome :) I'm having a lot of fun writing him!

Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2013 03:14 pm



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