Reviews For Veiled Threat
Title: Chapter 7 - The Way to a Girl's Heart

this guy- this...stalker/murderer- is the worst kind of predator b/c he is for-damn-sure delusional but also intelligent, seemingly wealthy and methodical. Being precise and steady means you're patient...and that's why he's so dangerous.  Also, if he's able to be a chameleon by discarding his non-descript clothing in a dumpster, and then strolling down the street, he could be that much more difficult to apprehend.  Quinn definately has his hands full.

And not just with the case either...

Nicole is playing hard-ball and becoming quite the challenge for the detective. LOL  She's nobody's fool is she! Can't wait to see more of them together.

Great job, update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yup, this guy is definitely smart about what he's doing...in a psycho kind of way. Glad you like the dynamic between Quinn and Nicole. They can each see that the other is attractive, but whether or not they have acknowledged they are attracted to each other remains to be seen.

 

Editing chapter 8 right now. It should be ready to post in the next day or so :)

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 06 2013 03:55 am

Title: Chapter 7 - The Way to a Girl's Heart

Dde is coo coo for Coco Puffs!!  She needs police protection asap, pdq and like yesterday! 



Author's Response:

Good thing Quinn is ready and willing :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 07:41 am



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