Reviews For Veiled Threat
Title: Chapter 10 - Finally

Oooooo this is getting good! Dude didn't waste no time collecting his prize after making the decision to do so - can't wait to see exactly how that fateful moment presented itself. He is cunning, patient and methodical but he's becoming sloppy isn't he? The cops have him on video, right? More importantly...a seasoned detective has seen his face! He just doesn't know that yet! Speaking of Quinn, he is going to be livid once he learns the abduction occurred during his watch!

 

It's been thirty-six hours since Nicole's disappearance and no one has reported her missing? Not even Leigha? Which makes me think foulplay has befallen the lovely designer as well, right?  There's no indication - that I can remember- that would warrant a silent friend if her roommate hadn't come home in three days!! Which means their places of business is void of their presence- soooo....something had to happen.

puhleezze update soon!



Author's Response:

I know..I knoww :( I'm terrible for not updating anything lol. I haven't forgotten, I've just allowed myself to be pulled away by other things...you know how life gets sometimes.

 

Now then..yes, it seems that our killer has made a few missteps in his haste to get dear Miss Nikki. He was on the security footage, even if his face wasn't visable. But I'm sure Quinn will pull the pieces together. Let's just hope he doesn't beat himself up too bad for leaving Nikki in her time of need. And what of Leigha?? You'd think she would be the first to sound the alarm when Nikki didn't come home. And no one at the matchmaking service has said anything either...hmmmm. (dun dun DUUHHHH..lol)

I promise, promise, promise to have something new for you very soon. Thanks for sticking with me :)

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 10 - Finally

Oh shit!!!!! So glad you updated. This is definitely my kind of story!! Brilliant! !



Author's Response:

It took me a while to finish it, but the entire time I was working on this chapter I was excited/nervous to find out what you all would think about the turn of events. Glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2014 08:02 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - Finally

Nicole really should have been more careful and she's been both drugged and kidnapped by this psycho.  I wonder how long will it take for Quinn to realize that she is missing? Will her job report her missing when she doesn't show up? Who is this this freakazoid? This was so good!!



Author's Response:

If only Quinn hadn't stormed out on her...*sigh* lol.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2014 02:50 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - Finally

Ohmygoodness, now this is what I call a real mystery! You had me glued to this story for ages my eyes refused to look away from it. Ohmygoodness, I just want to know who's the killer... I keep thinking it's cases but I'm not sure.

this story is so very well thought out and developed it's just too goody goody. I can't wait for the next chap!!!!



Author's Response:

 I'm glad I've got you hooked :) To tell you the truth, at first I wasn't sure who the killer was lol. Good thing I figured it out or we'd all be left in the dark and this thing would never get finished ;)

Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2014 02:03 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - Finally

OMG poor Nichole! 🙀. I just wanna push kind Detective Quinn down a 3 story flight of stairs -.-! Great chapter! I'm still not sure who did it! Had to have been that new guy. But who is he????



Author's Response:

Quinn can be a bit frustrating at times...or most of the time ;) I'm glad I still have you guessing...that means I'm on the right track. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29 2014 12:36 pm



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