Please update soon. I love Dinah and Oliver. I can't wait until the chemistry eXplodes between the two of them.
Author's Response:
Sorry about that... I lost my USB and was unable to work on any of my stories. Now that I've found it, I have a lot of work to make up! Please stay tuned, I haven't givien up or forgotten :)
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2014 01:43 pm
What is Oliver doing?? Hot and cold like that irks me!!
I just love this story!
Author's Response:
I'll try to heat things up for you. Glad you are enjoying things so far. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: November 28 2013 09:12 pm
Meredith is a bitch and cc why did Olover do her again? It had to be because she fiving it away for free1. Why is Dinah so self-effacing? That Mereho has got to go! Thank you for the double updates!
Author's Response:
Oliver is a man... sometimes they do dumb stuff lol. Mereho!! I love it :) Dinah is gradually growing and learning, but as with most things, she takes two steps forward and one step back. Happy Thanksgiving!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2013 02:57 pm
If I didn't like Meredith before, I sure as hell want to hit her in the throat for calling him Ollie. His name is Oliver, you git.
And yep, burning up. Wow, well done. I'm going to have to re-read the last two chapters. I sped thru them with increasing anticipation. Now, I need to go back and take my time and enjoy... like a fine wine.
Thanks a bunch for giving me something to read while I cook my greens and smoked turkey at 1AM in the morning. <3
Author's Response:
Happy Thanksgiving! Glad I was able to provide you with a little entertainment while you slaved over a hot stove lol. I thought that it would be typical of Meredith to give Oliver a pet name. Hope you enjoy re reading all of the action up to this point. More to come :)
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 28 2013 08:52 am
Damn, dancing is hella hot. And so is Oliver. Let the fire begin. Anxiously waiting for the next interlude.
Author's Response:
yes ma'am it is!! there's the standard bump/grind that you usually find in clubs and house parties... now that i've gotten older, i've come to realize that a slow dance in the arms of a real man is SOOOOO much more of a turn-on :)
p.s.--when/if Dinah and Oliver do the tango....watch out ;)
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 28 2013 06:42 am
I'm loving this story!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous
[Report This]Date: November 27 2013 02:24 am
Thsnj you uodating this story!! Me likey!!!
Author's Response:
You're most welcome!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2013 12:12 am
Uh oh. Dinah is in a world of trouble. Oliver is going to put it down on the dance floor and turn his swag meter up. I already need a bottle of water for what is about to happen. Watch out Dinah, the man is sex on two feet. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'll be sure not to disappoint :)
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2013 09:38 pm
Can you like hurry up please. lol :p
Author's Response:
lol... I'll do my best :)
Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 26 2013 09:22 pm
Ahhhh! Finally! The drama is beginning!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: October 20 2013 07:05 pm
More!!! I need more!!! Lol
Author's Response:
And more you shall have :) I've got some ideas cooking, stay tuned..
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 08:04 pm
Looooved it! How old are dinah and Oliver?
Author's Response:
I haven't settled on an exact age yet...shame on me lol. Dinah has moved out of the nest, but she strikes me as the type who probably took longer than her friends to set out on her own. Mid 20s maybe. I still can't get a read on Oliver..weird right, because I created him. He acts like a real grouch...so he gives off an older vibe, but based on the fact that he and Mac are such close friends (and Mac acts like a complete juvenile) he's most likely in his late 20s.
Clear as mud right? Lol
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 01:17 pm
so where did Oliver go to relieve his stress? Hope it wasn't Meredith. I think Din. is going to have to stand up to him and he is being abusive and it is beginning to be a turn off-- I am seeing Oliver as an old, bitter and mean man. Does he have a nice side? Everybody can see he is attracted to her from the teacher, his ex, to his friend.
Author's Response:
thank you for the feedback! hopefully i won't make you lose your patience..i'm trying to go for a more realistic progression/development of the characters. but you are right, Oliver is a bit of a hard pill to swallow at the moment.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2013 07:35 pm
Great story, I love the dancing and the two hot male dancers. Please post more soon :D
Author's Response:
thank you for reading! i'll try not to keep you waiting too long :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2013 10:22 am
Oh geez I love this! All the tension and cluelessness! Bring on the drama!
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 08:13 pm
Please, please, please update soon. I loved thins. I enjoyed the ballroom dancing and loved the chemistry with Mac.
Author's Response:
i've got a few ideas cooking.. definitely more to come :)
Reviewer: annette Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 20 2013 05:17 am
I'm so loving this story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2013 05:10 pm
Very good update
Author's Response:
Yay! So glad you think so :)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2013 06:06 am
Love it. Both men want her...let the competition begin.
Author's Response:
Thank you! With Mac in the picture, maybe Oliver will get rid of that stick up his butt..lol
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2013 05:54 am
Please come back soon. Loving this story.
Author's Response:
I'm trying to divide my time between Follow and Veiled...but it just seems that the characters are fighting to make their voices/stories heard. I'll try not to leave you hanging for too long :)
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2013 05:27 am
Nicely written.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2013 01:05 am
Good update. I'm the same way with Blurred Lines - it just gets into my head and makes me wanna dance. Can't wait to see what happen next for Dinah and Oliver.
Author's Response:
There will definitely be more dance scenes, inspired by songs that make me wanna move lol:) Glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2013 12:46 am
I like this story already. Keep up the awesome writing.
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 06:40 pm
Ok...WOW!!! That packed a punch, courtesy of Mac. After that update, I feel like looking for a dance class. LOL. Please update soon...I can hardly wait to see Oliver's reaction.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Yay! So glad you like it...I wanted to make the dance scene realistic without being overly technical. Sounds like it worked :)
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 06:10 pm
Owweeeeeeee I like me some Mac!!!! Poor Oliver he don't even know it. Lol can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep them coming!!.
Author's Response:
Mac is quite enjoyable... Oliver could take a few notes hehe. Stay tuned, much more in store :)
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 05:34 pm