This story is one of the most enjoable ones I've read on thi site so far. Can't wait for the next chapter^^Reviewer: Ashuri Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 08:49 pm
The summery peeked my interest immediately. How intriguing! I like your descriptions. It creates a very clear plastic cure in the mind. I also like the pace, the action has begun! Your heroine seems a bit naïve for being so smart, but the highly educated people often have no sense. :)
I am very interested in seeing what the next chapter will bring.Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 06:02 am
Great start so far. Not like anything I've read so far. One thing I'm curious about is a description of Summers appearance. I don't recall seeing one of her up to this point. Looking forward to your next update.Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 04:53 pm
Summer really surprised me with her attitude. She basically blew Mindy off about her warnings. Saying that the aliens reminded her of harmless puppies given all the security measure and warnings was completely ridiculous of her! Why the hell would they go to all that trouble otherwise! Now what is happening to her Mindy said her entire team was capable of. Mindy's experience was scary with her teammates. I just think between the two, Mindy was the one taking it seriously. And then Summer suggested no security! Is she for real?
Now my concern is what happened to Mindy because I know she put up a fight!
And what is the deal with Omid? And what's going to happen next...lol!
I'm now invested in this story.
Nice!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 12:53 am
Glad you are back. Enjoy this story very much. Please update soon.Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 10:51 pm
This is great! I love alien stories! There are not enough of these! Big question. If Mindy is right about what her asshole of teammates said then how are they going to hide it from the rest of the Earthlings? I am truly scared for these charaters. Your writing is phenomenal! Thanks for sharing your brilliant mind!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2013 10:22 pm
Well despite the fact that Mindy will become an alcoholic in the future, I wonder if anyone in charge of the project ever took into account cabin fever? Also why was Mindy the only human in her group?? It is like asking for something bad to happen!!!
I would love to read the first meeting through Omid's point of view, because his actions are confusing for me.
Also I hope that what the Zulraians in Mindy's team were just exaggerating or better yet lying, because I am not sure if the Earth government would allow that. I hope that nothing bad happens to Mindy and Summer.
I hope that you will be able to update more often, because I truly enjoy reading your story.Reviewer: Ageha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 31 2013 10:13 pm
Is Summer black? Weird not knowing what the characters look like even the aliens are described vaguely it's like reading a blank.... but to each there own. I guess I'll just picture a average looking black woman.
Date: August 30 2013 05:42 am
Nice update. I wonder why Odin is so rude and no one puts him in his place; why Mindy's team took her to the city; how did they get 23 children from the last human female LOL; and what is in the bottle that they THINK is alcohol. And which Zularian will be coming after Summer. And I would sure like to see more frequent updates.
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Date: August 30 2013 05:07 am
"...own a female..." That's pretty horrible. These Zulraian teammates of Mindy's are pretty awful. And what the fuck, Earth government? Are you guys in on this shit? This is basically kidnapping at this point. I hope Mindy can get back to Earth; I doubt she'll get there. They've got plans for her and her drinking problem is boring and bound to get her into trouble. Those girls are trapped!
I wish there was a segment detailing Mindy's experience. It sounds really interesting. I would have loved to get descriptions of the lower castes of Zulraians societies. Is it more like crowded open air markets in India or endless, winding streets of three story shops like Galway City?
I can't wait for Omid to save Summer from a sticky situation! At least she has Ricardo there as some kind of back up until she wises up to Omid's crush. If Omid is super old will she even be able to enjoy a 'Happily Ever After' with him before she dies and he's only middle aged?!!? I guess the Zulraians can make human females health and fertile - who says they can't tack a few years onto their lives?
Ah! I can hardly wait for more!Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 03:17 am
Wow. This went from intriguing to scary. So they were basically duped into being sex slaves and were not asked to come for research? I'm with Mindy. My black behind would be on the first ship back to Earth. Then I'd sue the underwear off of whoever set this up.Reviewer: Candace Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 02:40 am