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Title: Chapter 2

Wow!  I hope Summer and Mindy don't end up being an experiment!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 01:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

Update soon



Author's Response:

I'll try! Thanx for reviewing

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 01:24 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter. Please hurry with the update i can't wait to see how Mindy and Summer try to get out this situation

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Date: August 30 2013 01:18 am
Title: Chapter 2

Supreb!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 01:04 am
Title: Chapter 2

Something tells that Summer is going to be stupid? Does Monica believe that the Suorelians willl let them leave? What is Omid's problem? He is attracted to Summer this is about to get good. Lve it!!



Author's Response:

I gotta make this story interesting somehow. If everyone had common sense, it would be a very short story. Lol! Thanx for reviewing

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 12:37 am
Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting. I am intrigued, I need to read more.
I do find it a little strange that I do not know what Summer looks like. I can not picture the story because I can not see the story if that makes sense. I really like to know what the characters look like and also who are the main characters? Summer, Mindy, Omid, Shiltar? I am a little confused by the introduction of so many characters but little descriptions.
You do not have to add photos but if you are not good with descriptions then that would be beneficial, I can always imagine the markings on the alien race.

Update Soon!!

P.S. As a huge modern day Star Trek fan, I am loving the idea behind the story, I hope you will not abandon it.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your reply. As a reader I would rather use my imagination than look at pic of who a character's supposed to look like (sometimes pics even turn me off from appreciating a story), so I take that approach when I write. Right now I don't feel like their physical appearance is important, so I'm not gonna write about it.

We all know Mindy is a redhead and her last name is O'Malley, so we can assume she's irish.

The main character is Summer (the story is told in third person from her pov) all the rest are supporting characters.  As you enjoy future chapters, you will get feel of their dominant characteristics and then you can let your imagination run wild and make up the rest.

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 12:33 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm with Mindy, run don't walk to the nearest thing smoking! But, because this isn't a two chapter story I know Summer is probably not going to get away, lol. 



Author's Response:

I'm with Mindy too child. Lol!

 Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 12:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

This first chapter has me hooked... I can't wait to see how this story turns out. I love sci-fi.

 Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2013 05:03 am
Title: Chapter 1

Excellent start! I am so excited to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reply! There was a time not long ago where I used to stalk your LiveJournal page. You leaving a review to the first chapter of one of my stories humbles me. 

 Reviewer: Candace Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2013 11:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

What a neat concept. I'm diggin' it! Can't wait to read more :]

 Reviewer: Asia Ralaia Schiegoh Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2013 05:50 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start. looking forward to reading more

 Reviewer: Nu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 09:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Awesome chapter; update soon please. 

 Reviewer: SBrown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 09:26 pm
Title: Chapter 1

VERY interesting.  I can't wait to read more.  Based upon what General Gneim said, I don't think keeping Summer and Mindy sequestered will stop any Zularians determined to get them.  Please update soon! 

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 06:33 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Is it just my inbred paranoia, or are these ladies naive, or are you just dragging out the logic train before one of these lady scientists figure it out that these aliens have requested 'clever' human women with which to breed? Why the secrecy? Will we meet and learn the story of that human pioneer who birthed so many daughters for their leader?

 

I'm hooked. More please.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 05:49 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This is defintely diffrent and I like it.  I am a die hard Trekie so I am all into this. Please continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 06:21 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow!!  I love sci-fi, definitely looking forward to reading more.  Great introduction.  



Author's Response:

Thank you! Not enough scifi stories on this site.

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 05:43 am
Title: Chapter 1

I love sci-fy, and I'm so happy about this story....I can not wait for an update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you enjoy the latest chapter. 

 Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

i like this story already! Keep it up! This is definetly going on my track list.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 05:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

MOAR! NOW!  You are seriously killing me here.  This is an amazing twist on the classic 'we need your women' trope. I am so ready for the next chapter. 

Also, what was the end of the Zulraian female vagina evolutionary breakthrough?  Was really destruction or was that just a crew joke?  If the former, things must have not been terribly pleasant for that lady married to the Admiral in High Command.  What do their accents sound like?  What are these 'designs' on the skin that were referenced?  Did Gneim have any of them?  Is Gneim the love interest here?  Ahh, so many questions!



Author's Response:

Lol! Stay tuned and you'll get your answers. Thanx for your reply.

 Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 03:40 am
Title: Chapter 1

Me likey! More please.

Author's Response:

Ok!  Lol! Glad you like the story.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 02:43 am
Title: Chapter 1

The Zulrain want to use human woman as sex toys to procreate.  Who is going to catch Summer?  Good, please keep going.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 02:40 am
Title: Chapter 1

Supreb introduction, please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 02:27 am
Title: Chapter 1

So unique 



Author's Response:

Thank you

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 01:30 am
Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting concepet! I hope that you update this story soon, this is the second alien story that I have ever read on the chamber.



Author's Response:

I know! There aren't many are there? Thank you for your reply.

 Reviewer: Ageha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 01:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: August 16 2013 12:57 am


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