Title: Chapter 1

Updates please!!!!!! :-)

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I say, kill mr parsons and make a run for it.  her godmother has to know what is going on.



Author's Response:

Interesting, I like how you say kill him and make a run for it. More to come.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2013 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start! More please!

Author's Response:

Hopefully, the update will be posted next week.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2013 08:55 pm

Title: Chapter 1

 Cogratulations!!! I like this. I like this so much im tracking it!! Btw Mr.Parson is a asshole!! Can't wait for the next update! 



Author's Response:

Thank you I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 11:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Congratulations and welcome back! I had to go back and read this chapter twice. What's up with Mr. Parsons?!  I'm scared of him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the congrats! There is more to come Mr. Parsons is definitely one to be afraid of.

Reviewer: pearlcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 04:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting beginning.  Congratulations & welcome back.  Looking forward to more.  



Author's Response:

Thanks more to come.

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 04:04 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing. What is Mr. parson doing to Poppy in the back room?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Stay tuned for chapter 2.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 11:25 am



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