Reviews For My Immortal
Title: Hello Michail

So glad you've continued with this!!! I've been checking to see if you've updated every so often and I'm so glad you have haha. Can't wait to find out more about Michail, please post soon :-)

Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2015 10:05 pm

Title: Hello Michail

Intriguing story. Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2015 02:52 am

Title: Hello Michail

They speak and agree to meet, very interesting.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2015 03:29 pm

Title: First of Many Steps

Zenobia is trip, like his doctor would you to see him, like Michail would want to see after his episode.  You are letting your attraction overshadow your common sense.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2015 03:20 pm

Title: Hello Michail

Wonderful update...please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2015 02:43 pm

Title: First of Many Steps

I'm so happy you made an update, I was waiting ages haha. Loved this chapter and can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2014 03:22 pm

Title: First of Many Steps

Interesting story so far!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 07:10 am

Title: First of Many Steps

I'm sorry I never told you this before but I am a huge fan of Evanescene and their music is epic. When I first seen the title of your story I thought of them immediately and turned on the exact song just to read it. I like authors who put emotions into their work, who uses other metrials as an inspiration for righting. I am a lot like that. Most of my inspiration and ideas come from me when I listen to music. I am really enjoying this story so far and I can't wait until you update it again.

Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2014 09:33 am

Title: Familiar Spirit

That's it....it can't stop right there.

Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2014 07:08 am

Title: Familiar Spirit

I love it. Can't wait to read more, please update soon 😊c6;a039;

Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2013 01:32 pm

Title: Familiar Spirit

I have been waiting forever for this update. Lol. I was so happy when I saw this. I just wanted to dance. Lmao.

Awesome update!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 12:56 am

Title: Familiar Spirit

:)

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 12:29 am

Title: Familiar Spirit

She's attracted to Michail which is why she has questions but the man is obviously unhinged and seeing Zenobia could make it worse. The sister should run it by Michail's dctor first.  Please continue! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 01:29 pm

Title: You Promise

Is her name Maxine or is dude delusional? That was really stupid on her part, you don't confront p see ople who are cray cray!   



Author's Response:

No her name is Zenobia, and your right on that because if that was me I wouldn've been running inside my house until the police came. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 01:21 pm

Title: You Promise

This is good! Please keep writing this

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2013 11:23 pm

Title: You Promise

oh oh oh you better contintue with this story - pleeease!! it's a great start!!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2013 08:47 pm

Title: You Promise

I love it!!! What she promise! Loving this story can't wait for the next update! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2013 08:29 pm

Title: You Promise

Wonderful start...I am definitely intrigued and looking forward to read more.

Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2013 02:42 pm

Title: You Promise

Is it on purpose you wrote "you promise me" instead of "you promised me"? It makes me wonder if the man (obviously Michail) is a living creature, ghost or something, stuck in his time and repeating his last words...Great beginning!



Author's Response:

No it was intentionally done, your warm on the part of him being stuck in a certain time, but his not a ghost his all flesh and bone.

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2013 08:47 am



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