Is her name Maxine or is dude delusional? That was really stupid on her part, you don't confront p see ople who are cray cray!
Author's Response:
No her name is Zenobia, and your right on that because if that was me I wouldn've been running inside my house until the police came.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: October 22 2013 01:21 pm
This is good! Please keep writing this
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 11:23 pm
oh oh oh you better contintue with this story - pleeease!! it's a great start!!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 08:47 pm
I love it!!! What she promise! Loving this story can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 08:29 pm
Wonderful start...I am definitely intrigued and looking forward to read more.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 02:42 pm
Is it on purpose you wrote "you promise me" instead of "you promised me"? It makes me wonder if the man (obviously Michail) is a living creature, ghost or something, stuck in his time and repeating his last words...Great beginning!
Author's Response:
No it was intentionally done, your warm on the part of him being stuck in a certain time, but his not a ghost his all flesh and bone.
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 08:47 am