Reviews For The ChoZen
Title: M9 Beretta

OMG I can't believe jasper is dead.... I liked him and celeste's dynamic. He was an ass to her but I think he was that way because he cared about her and didn't want to see her die. He's one of those guys that would say I will kick your ass if you die on me and guess what he dies on her. I'm so sad, and I'm hoping Micheal and Celeste don't die either, I also like him and his creepy I barely know you but want you attitude towards Celeste. I want a chance to see how they work as a couple, micheal is such a rugged man and I find him so so hot. I have to say your writing of the Z's are masterful, I feel like I'm right there watching the whole scene play out. Great job, I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 05:52 am

Title: M9 Beretta

What the HELL!??! A cliffy really that was just evil!!! You are updating like now! Right? Just evil you are to just leave me hanging like this.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 04:57 am

Title: M9 Beretta

Was this a rollercoaster ride or was this a rollercoaster ride! I loved every second of it. Boohooed like a baby too! Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 01:44 am

Title: M9 Beretta

Jasper can't be dead!! Oh woe is me!!  Please tell me that Celeste and Michael aren't dead too?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 01:14 am



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