Reviews For The ChoZen
Title: Lady in White

Again LUV THIS! The place (I think) is a place to either a) use Celeste as a baby maker to build the future race (like sigouner weaver laying on that table being used to make more alien/humans on the last Aliens movie) OR b) use Celeste as a baby maker to make a more powerful/indestructable human race to take out the Z's.

Oh, THEN!!!!! the whiskey hair soldier just keep soothing Celeste and she swears she has seen him before. Could it be that the little hippie group Celeste hung out with were being prep for something big?

But then where does my SEAL come into all of this.....because I have a funky feeling he's been at that place before.

I cant help you about the title because i NEVER pay attention to a story's title. Sorry, that's just me. I would love to hear what the other readers came up with.

I'm sorry if Im not one of the readers with great feedback, but I just letting you know how AWESOME your story is!!! Keep on it!!

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2013 05:06 am

Title: Lady in White

Wow, this story is really awesome! One of the first stories on here that has kept me on the edge of my seat from the first chapter to the most recent. I really love the characters, the action and the suspense. What are they going to do to Celeste? and where is Michael? And I wonder if Jasper actually lived or if that was just a way for them to get Celeste to go willingly? Is the cove good or evil??? I can't wait for the next update! 

also, yes, I agree. the title kind of made me over look this story at first, I don't really know why I over looked it, you are a great writer and the title makes sense now after I've read it and I'm glad I did :)

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 08:14 pm



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