Reviews For The ChoZen
Title: The Beginning

I have no clue what the heck is going on. I mean that in a good way. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 09:29 pm

Title: The Beginning

Killing me with the constant cliffhangers but it's great I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: nikol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 10:20 am

Title: The Beginning

Did they impregnate her? Awkward. 

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2014 07:07 am

Title: The Beginning

What in the sam hell did they to Jasper and Celeste and why?  THere is just far too much evil and Norris is main psychophant.  I don't trust that Karen woman either.  I am glad that Jasper is up and about but I want to know what they did to him?  Jasper was cool people.  I am feeling that Michael as replaced Jasper in Celeste's affections.  I am not so sure that I like that?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2014 05:46 am

Title: Sacrifices

So glad I caught this story in the recent updates! 

Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2013 06:43 am

Title: Sacrifices

YAYYYYY your back! Very informative luv luv luv! Is Dr. Klien a tribute to Hershel? LOL

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 03:11 am

Title: Sacrifices

Where is Jasper???!!! The atmosphere is thick,everyone has a secret and suspects everyone!Great update!

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 12:54 am

Title: Sacrifices

I don't trust these people, Celeste be aware but of your surroundings.   Where is Jasper and is he really alive?  Why does Michael refuse to come inside the cove? Norris makes my eye twitch and my teeth itch!  I am curious to know why are going through all this trouble for Celeste it makes me feel they have sinister plans. Don't trust Karen either! Good stuff!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 02:23 pm

Title: Karen's 11

Omg yay they kissed. Please please please update, I friggen love this story.

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2013 06:54 am

Title: Karen's 11

It's about DAMN time for Celeste and my SEAL to take action (action like the 'relations' actions - HAH)!!! But I dont know if I can trust the rebels. Is it all a picture they want to paint to make them look like the good guys.....just dont know.

Luv the title!

I know what I will say at the table when its my time to say my thankfulness....

"I want to thank EJBradley for writing an awesome story"!!HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2013 01:36 am

Title: Karen's 11

I don't trust any of this people and I trust Karen even less than I do Norris so thst means that it's none existant.  Where is Jasper? Are they thinking that Celeste and Jasper have deve an immunity against the Z virus?  Did they do something to her while she was unconscious?  Who was that fool that grabbed her and when is he going to die?   Celeste has Michael begging for some puntang!! Me likey!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2013 01:31 am

Title: Karen's 11

Boomchickawowow!

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2013 08:59 pm

Title: Lady in White

Again LUV THIS! The place (I think) is a place to either a) use Celeste as a baby maker to build the future race (like sigouner weaver laying on that table being used to make more alien/humans on the last Aliens movie) OR b) use Celeste as a baby maker to make a more powerful/indestructable human race to take out the Z's.

Oh, THEN!!!!! the whiskey hair soldier just keep soothing Celeste and she swears she has seen him before. Could it be that the little hippie group Celeste hung out with were being prep for something big?

But then where does my SEAL come into all of this.....because I have a funky feeling he's been at that place before.

I cant help you about the title because i NEVER pay attention to a story's title. Sorry, that's just me. I would love to hear what the other readers came up with.

I'm sorry if Im not one of the readers with great feedback, but I just letting you know how AWESOME your story is!!! Keep on it!!

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2013 05:06 am

Title: Run!

I am not a walking dead fan but this story has me soo interested that I can't stop reading any and every update you post and will not stop until the story is complete and I am sure by that time I will be sad that it is ended.  What is going on with Celeste, why is she strapped down and where.  You must post soon.

By the way, at first I did skip over this story because the title did not draw me in but I am soooo happy I decided to read it because I love it.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2013 03:45 am

Title: Lady in White

Wow, this story is really awesome! One of the first stories on here that has kept me on the edge of my seat from the first chapter to the most recent. I really love the characters, the action and the suspense. What are they going to do to Celeste? and where is Michael? And I wonder if Jasper actually lived or if that was just a way for them to get Celeste to go willingly? Is the cove good or evil??? I can't wait for the next update! 

also, yes, I agree. the title kind of made me over look this story at first, I don't really know why I over looked it, you are a great writer and the title makes sense now after I've read it and I'm glad I did :)

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 08:14 pm

Title: Who Are You

YES!!!! she went back to get my SEAL...but at what cost??? Soooo, there's more to my SEAL than meets the eye. ANNNNDDD...what happen to Jasper?? So many questions!!! UGGGGGGHHHH.

This is the BEST story EVER on Chamber.I mean like I check this site everyday to see if you posted the next chapter.

 Noooooo, you cant stop watching TWD (you gotta know if Daryl kicks RIck's ass for kicking Carol out)

Anyways....i did see what you did here, almost like a WWZ type of deal! Loving it!!!

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 12:47 am

Title: Who Are You

This story is amazing, i literally stopped my life to finsh reading all the chapters in one sitting.

 

Don't want to offend you but i have seen that you dont have many reviews. i think it is because of your title, it put me off from reading it. This story has been epic from the start and needs more attention.

 

Reviewer: Chicken Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2013 01:06 pm

Title: Who Are You

WTH?!  Celeste went back for Michael, which is good.  Then Norris came back for them both, but I don't trust him.  Why was Norris giving Michael that creepy look?  What is wrong with Jasper if it isn't the zombie sickness?  Norris I have the feeling had something to do with the release of the disease.  Could whatever is wrong with Jasper be a cure or innoculation for the zombie disease?   What the hell as Celeste gotten herself into with partnership with Michael?  Is Michael a good guy or a bad guy?  I need more!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2013 04:59 am

Title: Dreams

WHAT!!! Ha this is sooooo my "written" The Walking Dead fix!! Celeste been bamboozle by the Sgt. AND she left Michael. WTF Celeste! I wouldnt trust NO ONE and just up and leaving with these strangers...no ma'am. Jasper is NOT alive I mean like Jasper was injuried so that he couldnt have gotten away from the Z'dogs right? PLEASE dont let this me the last of my SEAL Michael b/c I so luv Michael. But Jasper, I stopped liking him after he was the one that tied SEAL Michael up and left him to be abandon.

I did get a little confused as to why the Z's were at the military school, for experiment? I gotta go back and read it again (I get so excited and start reading ahead...I know sad but it's that good!

Anyway....DO.NOT keep me waiting for the next chapter...Thanks!!

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 06:03 am

Title: Dreams

Where in the hell is Michael going? Jasper is alive?  How? I don't like this Norris person, please don't let Celeste fall for him. Man I was starting to like Michael, please tell me that we haven't seen the last of him?  Excellent chapter! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 06:45 am

Title: Dreams

I am twirling right now, so that was the gov't bombing them and experimenting on z's? Omg and she really left Michael?!?

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 03:07 am

Title: Dreams

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!  I cant believe that she abandoned him. It feels like a trap, I dont think that jasper is alive. HOw can he still be alive, why did she leave michael ??????????????

Reviewer: libby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 02:12 am

Title: Dreams

So I dont know what to think. Slightly not liking Celeste right now cause it made her seem very stupid. But I am going to keep an open mind and hope for the best.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2013 11:53 pm

Title: M9 Beretta

OMG I can't believe jasper is dead.... I liked him and celeste's dynamic. He was an ass to her but I think he was that way because he cared about her and didn't want to see her die. He's one of those guys that would say I will kick your ass if you die on me and guess what he dies on her. I'm so sad, and I'm hoping Micheal and Celeste don't die either, I also like him and his creepy I barely know you but want you attitude towards Celeste. I want a chance to see how they work as a couple, micheal is such a rugged man and I find him so so hot. I have to say your writing of the Z's are masterful, I feel like I'm right there watching the whole scene play out. Great job, I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 05:52 am

Title: M9 Beretta

What the HELL!??! A cliffy really that was just evil!!! You are updating like now! Right? Just evil you are to just leave me hanging like this.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 04:57 am



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