Reviews For The ChoZen
Title: Run!

I figured Jasper would die. He gave off a vibe of being selfish and was just using her to me for sex. Red flag when he had no feelings towards his ex girlfriend when she died and even the father and son.<p>I like Michael even though he was a little creepy watching them. I think he truly has an interest in her and values her opinion on how to survive.</p><p>Great story I'm really liking it.</p>

Reviewer: Jonara2010 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 01:51 am

Title: M9 Beretta

Was this a rollercoaster ride or was this a rollercoaster ride! I loved every second of it. Boohooed like a baby too! Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 01:44 am

Title: M9 Beretta

Jasper can't be dead!! Oh woe is me!!  Please tell me that Celeste and Michael aren't dead too?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 01:14 am

Title: Michael

This story is so action packed yet it flows so well. I'msoooo excited to see where this goes.

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 06:18 am

Title: Michael

Michael is creepy watching her and Jasper have sex. He is so jealous please don't let him come between them.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2013 02:00 pm

Title: Run!

Excuse the TWD reference but I still have a Daryl Dixon type love for Michael and a Caryl like loathing for Jasper/Celeste pairing. Michael is my guy here can't help it. I like him. Thank you for the update can we get another one please!!! ;-)

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2013 06:42 am

Title: He, Who Watches

I seriously love this story. The whole idea of the zombies getting smarter is genius. I love Michael because even though he isnt known well by Celeste he seems to still have his humanity. I cant say the same about Jasper. With his disconnect from his emotions I think if he had to choose, his life would come before Celeste. Since I absolutely love her I want Jasper out the running for Celeste.
Looking foward to the next update. I hope its soon like today soon.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 01:01 pm

Title: He, Who Watches

I am not trusting Michael  it seems like he is trying to come between Jasper and Celeste.  I am loving Celest she will not be easlily fooled. Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 01:54 am

Title: Run!

Is Jasper jealous and is Celeste special.  I can't wait to see how this unfolds and if this cabin is actually an a base for counterattack on the Z's.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 01:05 am

Title: Stranger

Ah. This story is so exciting!!!

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 04:54 am

Title: Stranger

Interesting story so far!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2013 05:39 am

Title: Run!

I find myself more fascinated by the story with the third character because how will he affect Celeste and Jasper's relationship.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2013 02:38 am

Title: Stranger

Enjoying the story. Lately, I am fascinated by most things zombie related.  Interested in how the addition of the third will affect Celeste and Jasper.  Plus, looking forward to more action as they try to find safe places to avoid for the Z's.

Reviewer: KimR Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 31 2013 02:12 am

Title: Strange, Flow

Okay how could you end that chapter right there? I. Will be on pins and needles until you update. Why did Jasper take off his coat?  I really hate that they left the father and son but they had to save themselves.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 12:29 am

Title: Run!

Wow that woman and her child got Jasper and his father killed. I want more!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2013 03:17 pm

Title: Run!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2013 02:43 pm

Title: Run!

Aaaahhh! Zombies yeeeeeeeeesss!!! I'm following this story with the utmost excitement.

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2013 09:36 am



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