Reviews For Gandy's Glory
Title: Chapter 10- Get It Right, Get it Tight

Glory is about to blow up!!   Momma is about to stick her nose where it don't belong, Glory ain't in love with Nathaniel.  Glory is gonna have to check her momma. Good stuff!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 11:43 pm

Title: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

David lease don't hurt Glory she said s young and inpressionable.  David is so fine!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 10- Get It Right, Get it Tight

I liked the story at the beginning bit now ideal glory is looking herself in David, the relationship is a little cold and business like. Looking  forward to update

Reviewer: Vanessa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 10:23 pm

Title: Chapter 10- Get It Right, Get it Tight

Did the photo for Glory change? I thought she looked different...



Author's Response:

she does I couldn't find a picture of the girl i used in the beginning getting "done up"

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 09:56 pm

Title: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

Good Lord,  Mamma about to come in here and mess stuff up.  You may not like David, but you seriously want her with a man like Nathaniel.  Puhleese,  I am seriously thinking Mamma bear need a shrink and not just Jesus.  Please update, can't wait to see how this is going to go down.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 08:49 pm

Title: Chapter 9- Rising

Oh lord, here comes nosy mama! Glory and David are cute together. I can't believe Glory doesn't want some of David.



Author's Response:

let a man make me sign a contract and i'd be a bit reserved LOL

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 04:39 pm

Title: Chapter 9- Rising

OK this is going to get worse befpre it gets better... it seems that as soon ans David began listening to his IDIOT brother, the onece sweet banter between David and Glory VANISHED... Simon makes me ILL, he is motivated by JEALOUSY and GREED.

David needs a new mangager.



Author's Response:

amen he does

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 02:10 pm

Title: Chapter 9- Rising

Don't like David and I still loathe Simon.  David how could you treat Glory  with such disrespect?  Glory you didn't have sign that contract but now that you did such it up and accepts the perks.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 06:34 am

Title: Chapter 9- Rising

It feels like Gandy has taken the propulsion out of this relationship by making her sign the contract. The chemistry doesn't feel the same as it did originally. I don't know what he's going to do but he needs to start trying to make it better, fast. 



Author's Response:

i agree, i agree

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 05:33 am

Title: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

My bad, obviously I read chapter 2 thinking it was one, okay Glory was wrong as two left shoes, the encounter was in deed a set up for her and David to meet up again. Good beginning, and Glory leading a double life and flriting with and older guy, just wrong.  Yet I like the premise and now I'm really looking forward to see if Glory will find her own way or continue to live the way her mom wants her which isn't really a bad thing, LOL

Reviewer: johnandvan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2013 05:19 am

Title: Burning the Mask

I enjoyed the first chapter I am not so sure I get why David would want to meet in such a public place since the media frenzy would only increase? If it was only a chance encounter between David and Glory, why is she considered a hypocript, I thought maybe they were cauglt in a moment. Will enjoy seeing where this goes.

Reviewer: johnandvan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2013 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 8- Foundation

She is going to leave...alone. For a few weeks, they won't talk (aka she won't talk to him). He will be a wreck, and come to the States to court her infront of her family.

Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 08:22 pm

Title: Chapter 8- Foundation

Thanks for the update! You made made me so happy this morning. I don't have any suggestions because I have no clue what either of them will do. I have a question though, Did David have to sign a contract too? Something that says he'll stay true to her for 5 years, etc? 



Author's Response:

NOPE.

He can do whatever he wants basically

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 02:44 pm

Title: Chapter 8- Foundation

Wow what a teaser. I think he needs to realize where she is coming from and realize his true feelings for her. They should talk and get there feelings out. 



Author's Response:

You still think he has feelings for her deep down inside? interesting...

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 03:11 am

Title: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

Question when Davis said he had seen her naked,did Glory and David sleep together? I must have missed it.



Author's Response:

they were in bed naked together after their dinner meet up :)

Reviewer: maident Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 8- Foundation

Looks she's just signed a deal with the devil.



Author's Response:

yup yup yuppp

Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 01:27 am

Title: Chapter 8- Foundation

I think that they will both be stubborn and won't say a word to each on the ride to the airport.  I think that Glory will talk to an attorney to see if she can get out of that contract.  Does she have a copy of said contracat?  David has made sure that I am no longer infatuated with his fine as being an asshole has made him less attractive.  I would like to hear why David went along with his brother Simon and asked Glory to sign that contract.  YOu taking out your anger on David because you allowed him to sample the goodies without know what your association truly meant.  There is no doubt that David is wrong but you put yourself in that trick bag.  Suck it up like he grown woman that you are Glory.  Good times!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 12:58 am

Title: Chapter 7

really enjoying this story - Glory is going to explode when she reads the contract properly and she will roast David's nuts then, loool!

gaaah, loving this story - hope you'll update soon! and thank you for the update! :D



Author's Response:

thank you for the review! I am glad you are enjoying this story! :)

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 04:12 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Ahhhhh! David has gone nuts!!!!!!!!! Lord have mercy! Lmfao 



Author's Response:

She gonna need a whole lot of holy water for him.

Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 12:12 am

Title: Chapter 7

I am not liking any os this people and David with his fine self has now moved to the top of the list.  Simon is jealous of his brother, but hell he's fine his damn self. Smh!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2013 08:27 pm

Title: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

I love the story so far. The cast is hot! Gandy is just delicious and Glory is super super pretty. The only thing I had to squint because the image looked like Glory was in the middle of a hoarder house. Lol there's stuff everywhere or maybe it's just the angle of the pic. In any case, she's very pretty! Lol And judging from the way her mom looks and her last name I guessing she's African? What part? I'm thoroughly liking this story so far. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I usually choose congolese names

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2013 07:11 pm

Title: Chapter 7

5 years though? Wow. 

 

Great unexpected treat!



Author's Response:

that's why you always read the contract! 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2013 06:08 pm

Title: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

I just want to tell you that, I love all your stories and you are an amazing writer. Please keep up the good work and finish this story :) 

 

Now.

Simon's ass needs a beatdown



Author's Response:

thank you!!!

Reviewer: AvidReader Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 6- Not Too Good.

Love it.  Keep up the good work

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 07:24 pm

Title: Chapter 6- Not Too Good.

Aww damn Simon.  Great story. Love David!!



Author's Response:

Damn Simon

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 03:26 pm



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