I meant to mention this two chapters ago, but got wrapped up in wanting to get to the next chapter. I thought Tess had her on house, but you mentioned apartment. Is it a condo?
Author's Response:
Yea, it's a typo, sorry
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: May 24 2014 11:03 pm
Tess absolutely deserved the cold shoulder from Jay but love gives you more than what you deserve. Love allows for forgiveness. ;)
Jay isn't good for Tess. Yes, she acted like an 8th grader in a love triangle. Jay's reaction was completely justified but it could've been different. He was very focus on his feelings if betrayal. He could've forgiven Tess and helped her forgive herself for backsliding. He could've asked her to seek counseling. He could've helped her. Tess didn't deserve any consideration from Jay but if he loved her like he said then he would not have let her go.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2013 09:04 am
Wow that was so sweet can't wait 4 whatever U have next
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2013 09:55 am
More plesse
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2013 05:22 am
Ahh this was a cute story. I could have used another chapter or two but nicely done.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2013 05:19 am
Loved it, I liked their vows. I say yippee skippy to both the prequel and sequel!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2013 04:32 am
Bravo!! Thamk you.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2013 04:32 am
i'm so excited to read what happens next! tess and jay foreverr! don't have us wait too long for her answer! thanks for writing!
Reviewer: britt Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2013 01:28 am
Eric got knocked the beep out!
Jay's father just laid it all out there, didn't he?
Good to know Jay got back in the saddle again and that poor maid :-).
What is next for my favorite couple?
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2013 11:29 pm
Wow go Jay he's got a dominant side who knew
Then that proposal well that just threw me way to surprise a girl I was stunned like her.
Ur right Scandal was marvelous especially the part where he finally has her @ The house that he bought 4 them so he really was serious about divorcing Milly.
Anywho update again said to see the ending coming but it's been a great ride
Date: November 25 2013 08:06 pm
Please continue!!! I love this story sooooooo much
Reviewer: Keys72095 Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2013 06:45 pm
Whew, I think Jay put it on her AND me! That was some definite buildup. Tom is hilarious; I busted when I read the dinner scene. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 25 2013 05:47 pm
I'm so glad Tess has finally gotten the help that she needed snd grown a backbone where Eric is concerned. I don't know why but I heard Kevin Hart's voice coming out of Jay's mouth during that confrontation. Eric got what he deserved but I wouldn't be surprised if he tried to start some drama on some get back mess.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 25 2013 05:13 pm
Hot damn, he popped the question! I love Tom, I ain't mad at him for what he said to Tess. I bet that ring is beautiful. So good!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2013 05:11 pm
I want to see Eric realize that he has LOST; an epilogue would be fine.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 08:47 am
I'm glad Tess and Jay made up and she was just putting on an act in front of Jay since she couldn't really be mad with him, that was the only thing that made me surprised about the last chapter but you explained it well. Great story
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 03:23 am
I didn't realize that Eric was related to Malik, how could be kin to an asshole like Eric? I am so happy that Tess is still apologizing, it makes me feel better. I don't know what I'd like to see but I don't want Jay to make it so easy. Make her work some more. She's in therapy which is good, but slow it down now. Make Tess earn Jay's trust back.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 02:42 am
Thanks for the new chapter. I like how tess got herself together. And I liked that, after their time apart, a time they both actually needed, they were able to have a conversation and to actually listened to each other. It's very gratifying to read a story about characters growing more mature, and not staying stuck into cludish behavior for chapters after chapters. Good work.
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 11:48 pm
Nice story, she should have forgiven him he wasn't the one that cheated. ..who is to say how long if ever it takes someone to get over being lied to and cheated on. thank you great story
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 09:27 pm
I think that it was good they had that much space. Tess needed to get her life together before she could be the woman that Jay deserves. If I were Jay I would be icy too because she knew what it felt like to be cheated on. You never know what you had until it's gone and they both figured it out.
Reviewer: Jonara2010 Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 06:14 am
I know she was wrong but I think she should have made him sweat a little and they should talk more. I know he was/is hurt but I think they should explore the new them.
Reviewer: Daddyprincess Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 05:29 am
I may be in the minority byt Im happy she suffered a little befor forgiving her. This way she'll fly right and keep her legs closed. Good update.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 05:18 am
Damn six months fast!! Jasmine took pity on Jay and gave him Tess' address and now he wants to give Tess anothet chance. I love that she even got therapy and apologized to Jay again.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 03:56 am
Nothing sadder than someone who has been cheated on begging to be taken back.
Pulled it off in the end though, bc before that break down, it came across to me as though Tess was full of it.
I think he should lay off oncatering to her and spoiling her--she can spoil herself, now.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 03:00 am
Thanks for the update. Jay's reaction is pretty understandable, and I am still siding with him. I am also less mad at Tess, but she really needs to grow up: I get how she feel, but she needs to back down, suck it up, and work at proving Jay she can be trust again. Pushing him to forgive her is NOT the way. She has to earn his trust back. So she needs to respect how he feels, and stop pushing. Be a true friend ad respect his need for space. Step back, use the time she has now to do some soul searching on her own, with a therapist may be, so that she would start to learn why she so easily got back with Eric, and how she can get past that very bad habit. And then, after some time, try and rebuild her friendship with Jay.
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2013 03:20 am