I loved the story. I'll be reading more of your work, Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 07 2017 04:04 pm
This was a very nice story.
Thank you.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2013 02:50 am
That was a really good chapter...you had me gettin teary eyed.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2013 02:44 am
I think Denise is about to kick some butt.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2013 01:25 am
I was hoping that Denise would hold out a little longer.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2013 01:18 am
Awwwww! So beautiful! I love, love this story. Wonderful job from beginnig to the end. I am going to be reading this story for a looonngg time. There is nothing like it. I can't wait to read the new story, you know how to make a hit story.
Great job! Keep doing ya thang on Chamber :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 07:30 pm
I'm wondering how he will tell her the truth about his work.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 10:18 am
This seems like a cute story.
I can't wait to the rest.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 10:08 am
Loved this story! Great Job! I can not wait to read your next story! CONGRATULATIONS!!! 10 stars
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2013 03:58 am
Loved this story! Great Job! I can not wait to read your next story! CONGRATULATIONS!!! 10 stars
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2013 03:58 am
great story...
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 09:54 pm
That was a GREAT story from beginning to end.. Issac and Denise are an amazing couple, and I'm glad that they are happy, anf that he and Julian are close again.
It was also good to read that Evan is in threapy rather than prison, I kinda hope that maybe he gets his own story(hint hint)
Again great story and looking forward to reading more from you.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 09:04 pm
Yes I loved tbe epilogue!! Although when a cancer patient goes into remission it's a good thing as it means that cancer is dormant. If prostate cancer is caught early enough it has a high cure rate. It was a pleasure reading about Issac and Denise as their love was inspiring. Evan received the help that he needed and Levi got to know Issacxand enjoy a bigger family! I give this story two thumbs up!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 04:53 pm
YEAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I love a happy ending to a GREAT story. You rock! I am sad it's ending but with all the twist andd wonderful turns. I will be able to move on... *sigh* LOL! Please keep writing stories, you are amazing at it. :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 06:09 am
great job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 06:08 am
Levi is a SMART boy, and I'm so glad he remember what Julian taight him... even though Evan is a total DOUCHE BAG, I kinda wanna see he redeemed, maybe get some therapy do deal with his ANGER issues.
That proposal was so ROMANTIC. Issac and Denise both deserve HAPPINESS.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 04:55 am
They found Levi, Evan is in the hoosegau and Julian is out of the hospital! Issac are Denise are graduating and Issac popped the question. These two are perfect for one another and I hope the Julian continues to beat the cancer. Bring on the epilogue!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 04:32 am
Cutie pie is what I call little Levi. Yes, Isaac was granted forgiveness by Denise, so he must do the same for his father. I would like to see Isaac and Denise engaged, also they will need yo build a relationship with Levi, because Julian will leave his care to Isaac and Denise to raise him in a loving family environment. That's what I would like to see.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2013 11:43 am
Evan is so jealous of Issac it borders on evil. Evan needs help and I really want Issac to whoop his ass!!! If so choose to give us another update, it would amazing!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2013 02:50 am
WTH is wrong with Evan, GROW the HELL UP Dude, its like you HATE Issac b/c he was born, and now he basiclly kidnapped his baby brother.. this is not going to end well.
I however am glad that Issac and his dad are taking things step by step.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 07 2013 02:18 am
Great update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2013 01:43 am
Wonderful!! I love Issac, he put it down and loved Denise something fierce... DAMNNNNN!! I can't wait for more on this story and you are right abou Levi, he is adorably cute. Issac's dad is on a good path, I hope he has changed for the better and works on making his little men proud.
GREAT JOB!!!! :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: December 06 2013 04:03 pm
Love this chapter, and I'm loving Issac and Denise more and more.
Its good that Issac and his dad are trying to make peace and put the past.
The jury is still out on Evan, I wonder if he still has a little jealousy in him toward Issac.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 06 2013 04:51 am
I love it.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 06 2013 04:09 am
Fantastic. I love when families try and come together.
Issac should forgive, it's the right thing besides Denise forgave him, so he should understand the power of forgiving.
Levi is adorable, nothing like the innocence of a child to bring a family full circle.
Denise is playing the perfect understanding girlfriend, I love it.
I don't dislike Evan did I miss something because everyone else does. It couldn't be his comment about Denise right, that didn't really bother me....
I think his character could have many layers. I hope to see him next chapter, I love Evan's relationship with Levi, hopefully Issac can have one with both Evan and Levi.
Update Soon!!
Date: December 06 2013 01:21 am