well everything happans for a reason and when an oppurtunity came, Simone clearly took it. Culture shock is a normal reaction but that is what makes it fun.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2013 09:16 pm
I like the choice of characters and how the pictures forshadow the characters themselves.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 09:14 pm
This is freaky but there is a 9 year age gap between me and my oldest sister and she has a son named Nathan. Besides that, I'm loving this story. The writing is fresh and easy to follow and the characters are already well-developed in just the first 3 chapters, that I can clearly picture everyone in my head, their mannerisms, personalities what have you. I have a particular soft-spot for cold, standoffish men (at least in fiction) so Ryu's attitude, though needing some adjusting and with time I'm sure it will, just makes everything more real and shows the divide between cultures. Love the chemistry between Simone and Jiro. Wonderful job.
Reviewer: Lapis Love Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 02:58 pm
Ryu s a asshole but damn he's a fine one. I am glad that she called home and spoke with her sister. Ryu is going to fall hard and it will funny to watch. Simone's interests is already peaked but she thinks that she dislikes him. She has much to learn, but I don't want her hurt as she is only there for six months and I can't see her choosing to stay.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 01:59 pm
You're off to a great start. I already know that I'm going to love this story. I can't wait until the next chapter.
Reviewer: Ana Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 14 2013 08:47 pm
Great story, I love the plot and this chapter left me wanting more. I can't wait for your next post. I hope you post soon :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2013 06:25 am
Love the story so far! Keep up the goodmwork I can tell already im lovemthe story
Reviewer: bannakiwi Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2013 03:40 am
Love the story so far! Keep up the goodmwork I can tell already im lovemthe story
Reviewer: bannakiwi Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2013 03:40 am
Interesting story and good start. I am looking forward to read more.
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2013 01:42 am
i enjoy what you have so far and can't wait to read more
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 11:20 pm
Thank you for posting this story. Am intrigue, I like Simone and her openness to learning and developing her passion. Am looking forward to seeing the relationship grow between her and Ryu. Thanks again, I love your writing style, so I know this will be another winner.
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 10:32 am
Intersting so far.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 07:03 am
Great start.
I already like Denise and Ryu. Love is not always at first sight lol.
Jiro is a little flirt, I hope he doesn't get in the way of Denise and Ryu.
Great concept I look forward to reading about something different.
Best
Date: November 11 2013 06:39 am
Great concept. I love Japanese culture so I look forward to reading about how Simone and Ryu come together.
I understand Ryu completely, I too would be annoyed at all the people coming in and out all of the time. Especially if most knew nothing about the culture before coming over and worse can't even last the entire internship. I am sure that Ryu has seen many promising chefs that come to be tutored by his father come and go lol
I can't wait to see Denise change his opinions and learn more about Japanese culture and find love along way.
It's way to soon to be dissing Ryu, the story just started.
Jiro is a funny guy, but you can tell that he is a playboy and nothing more.
Can't wait to read more.
P.S. Love the pics for Denise and Ryu they look great together!
Date: November 11 2013 06:35 am
Ryu is an asshole!! Jiro is a hot mess, and I wonder which one will float her boat. I hope that it's Jiro as I already have an intense dislike of Ryu the ass. Good stuff!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 05:57 am
Asian men, love this story already!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2013 05:47 am
Great chapters. I love the cast pics. Loving it already.
Update Soon!!
Date: November 11 2013 03:03 am