Okay, this is good, but incomplete. So what is up with Jesse and Nahla now in 2016?
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2016 01:47 pm
Well that was a load to put on somebodies shoulder
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: February 21 2014 06:53 pm
Can't wait to see what happens now that she knows she's a lifemate. Love this story.
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2014 06:09 am
Looooooving this! Awesome chapter! :)
Reviewer: Heleana503 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 20 2013 03:55 am
Cool story. Wonder what happens next...
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2013 12:15 am
Wondering if this vampire/ moroii is alpha or possesive? If so Nahla has no idea.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2013 04:16 pm
This story took a unexpected turn, it's still a good read though. ^_^
Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2013 03:48 pm
Awwww SNAP! I KNEW IT!
Gurl, fine ass man and dayum good lovin dont never come without drama and see..fine-ass Jesse is king a the damn Underworld. Sheeeeit.
But bet that little explanation of lifemates and destiny can pretty much get him forgiven. I'm sayin though..who gonna say get out to that little speech?!
MORE PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 08:13 pm
I hate when it ends :(
Reviewer: Teiga Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 02:41 pm
OMFG!!! WOW!!! That is a lot to take in.... I can't wait for more :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 11:20 am
Hurry and update, okay?! This is going to kill me. I like this story alot!
Reviewer: Sissy Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 07:26 am
I should've known that you wouldn't have a regular twist. Awesome chapter though. Love it!
Reviewer: Sissy Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 07:20 am
Hate cliffhangers but this was a good way to end the chap.
Reviewer: Sissy Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 06:33 am
Well damn. Lets get straight to the point, shall we? I'm ready to read the next chap!
Reviewer: Sissy Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 06:25 am
Woah Jesse that is a lot take in. I'm stressed out and we're just getting started. Poor Nahla.
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 06:08 am
Um. How is Nahla still standing? I would've fainted right after he mentioned triplets (as the minimum). Lol. The hits keep on comin.
Reviewer: bhvana Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 06:04 am
Well looks like Nahla has had a one night stand with the devil lol awesome chapter update soon.
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 02:23 am
I like I like I like.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: December 17 2013 06:06 pm
I knew this guy, Jesse, or whatever his name is was hiding something. Ummph...oh and LUV IT but I need more and longer chapters....PLEASE!
Reviewer: AD Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 17 2013 02:25 am
Awww hell (literally) naw, she is stading there like :0. I actually be free and do me and I am being done in with this dude telling me he is a vampire and I am pregnant already a month with TRIPLETS. See imma need to go back to sleep and we're gonne wake up and try this again. This is too much. Please update, want more.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 09:56 pm
Nice!
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 07:48 pm
You're such a tease, love it, longer chapters please. :-) more please
Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 07:07 pm
Nice turn. Looking forward to where you go with this.
Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 04:37 pm
Damn. This is too damn good. *shakes head*
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 03:50 pm
Damn, she sure can pick them. I would feel one iota of sympathy for her but she went with stranger for sex Put in your big girl panties and make the best of the situation. Jesse, Jesse I love you dude! You were so bogus for sexing the woman up without telling her the truth about yourself.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 02:11 pm