Title: Chapter One

Interesting start!

Author's Response:

Awesome! Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 07:08 am

Title: Chapter One

Your writing is the kind that inspires me. It's so descriptive and I can just imagine real people having such a conversation and interacting as such. Already love the character development going on and the build when Lauren meets Mr. Road Hazard. Very much looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Wow thank you. LOL! The meet cute isbound to be something.

The muse is uncooperative at the moment though.

Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 11:43 pm

Title: Chapter One

This chapter was confusing at first. I was half way through the chapter when I realized there was 2 different females in the car with Eli.

Author's Response:

I've never written a scene with three voices competing for dialogue before. I'll be sure to pay closer attenion to making future ones more cohesive.

Thanks for reading and the feedback.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 01:46 am

Title: Chapter One

NICE BEGINNING.  LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE. 

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

Awesome! As soon as the muse decides to cooperate I will be sureto update.

Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 05:41 am

Title: Chapter One

Seems like a good start! I can't wait to see what kind of trouble Ian get Lauren into!



Author's Response:

LOL! Those two are going to be something.

Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.

Reviewer: Justkillingtime21691 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 05:05 am

Title: Chapter One

As always, I'm spellbound by your writing. I love the set up, the interaction- everything about this story! I can't wait for more. I'm fascinated by Lauren; she's definitely jaded but something tells me that it's not a fatal condition. Perhaps all it takes is just the right one .

 

Excellent beginning!



Author's Response:

Hey there awesome beta-reader,

LOL but will Road Hazard be the right one ;-)

Thanks for all your help and the constructive feedback as always.

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 09:46 pm

Title: Chapter One

YAY! You are back!

I loved it. Can't wait for Lauren to meet Ian. Now hurry up with the update.



Author's Response:

Hehe so demanding. Muse is uncooperative at the moment :-(

I'm glad you liked it and thank you for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 07:25 pm

Title: Chapter One

Good start can't wait for the next chaper!



Author's Response:

Awesome! Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review. Sadly the muse is uncooperative at the moment.

Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 06:47 pm



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