Interesting start!
Author's Response:
Awesome! Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 05 2014 07:08 am
Your writing is the kind that inspires me. It's so descriptive and I can just imagine real people having such a conversation and interacting as such. Already love the character development going on and the build when Lauren meets Mr. Road Hazard. Very much looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Wow thank you. LOL! The meet cute isbound to be something.
The muse is uncooperative at the moment though.
Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2014 11:43 pm
This chapter was confusing at first. I was half way through the chapter when I realized there was 2 different females in the car with Eli.
Author's Response:
I've never written a scene with three voices competing for dialogue before. I'll be sure to pay closer attenion to making future ones more cohesive.
Thanks for reading and the feedback.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 01 2014 01:46 am
NICE BEGINNING. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Awesome! As soon as the muse decides to cooperate I will be sureto update.
Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2013 05:41 am
Seems like a good start! I can't wait to see what kind of trouble Ian get Lauren into!
Author's Response:
LOL! Those two are going to be something.
Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.
Reviewer: Justkillingtime21691 Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2013 05:05 am
As always, I'm spellbound by your writing. I love the set up, the interaction- everything about this story! I can't wait for more. I'm fascinated by Lauren; she's definitely jaded but something tells me that it's not a fatal condition. Perhaps all it takes is just the right one .
Excellent beginning!
Author's Response:
Hey there awesome beta-reader,
LOL but will Road Hazard be the right one ;-)
Thanks for all your help and the constructive feedback as always.
Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2013 09:46 pm
YAY! You are back!
I loved it. Can't wait for Lauren to meet Ian. Now hurry up with the update.
Author's Response:
Hehe so demanding. Muse is uncooperative at the moment :-(
I'm glad you liked it and thank you for reading and taking the time out to leave a review.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2013 07:25 pm
Good start can't wait for the next chaper!
Author's Response:
Awesome! Thanks for reading and taking the time out to leave a review. Sadly the muse is uncooperative at the moment.
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2013 06:47 pm