Reviews For Carmen
Title: Chapter 1: My Life

Finally was able to do some reading and decided to read your newest story, this one! First of all, child what are you going through to make you write a story like this? Not that you have to tell me, but I did read your author's note which is why I asked. 

This story is so dark, it made me cringe and have a bad taste in my mouth. So you know that if you can get me to do all of that you got some great writing skills. And even though I didn't like what this poor girl was going through and feeling like she was another Precious (the movie) I loved the way you told the story.

This chapter was hard to get through, but I'm going to wait for the next one because I hope something or someone good comes into this girl's life! I want, no need more chapters so I can see if this girl's life get at least slightly better.

 

Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2014 03:14 am

Title: Cast Pics

Oh my gosh. My eyes got wide than a mug reading this! I just... wow. I really want to slap her "dad". That bastard... fronting mother****** he is. He has enough sense to act right when others are watching but can't actually live the right way? That's some bull.
Good start, Treale.

Reviewer: LadySade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 02:02 am

Title: Chapter 1: My Life

Carmen never stood a chance. Death is too good for those two that birthed her.

Do continue.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1: My Life

I like the premise of your story I just think it need a little tightening/editing so that it flows easier, and makes it easie to read! 

Reviewer: bry1124 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 09:01 pm

Title: Chapter 1: My Life

its good. keep going.

Reviewer: DaSoulVicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 07:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1: My Life

I am hooked. Very good beginning

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 04:25 pm

Title: Cast Pics

Wow is all I can say.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 02:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1: My Life

An interesting beginning, although the story is dark I do like it. I feel sorry for Carmen cause her childhood was horrible but she willing moved from one abuser to another. So I don't know how to feel about her. You have laid the groundwork for an epic story. I hope you continue.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 12:39 pm

Title: Cast Pics

Interesting start, I think you should continue. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 12:36 pm



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