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Title: The Kill

Dang! I don't like timberlake so this story didn't bother me. It's good and well written. It drew me in and I finished it in minutes. Great job! 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 11:36 am
Title: The Kill

Bravo! Bravo! Bra-damn-vo!!!

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Date: March 23 2014 02:34 am
Title: The Kill

Good story and I can't feel sorry for her because she wanted this just as much as he did.

Be careful what you wish for.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 09:33 pm
Title: The Kill

Wow , that's all I can say ! Just WOW

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Date: March 22 2014 08:02 pm
Title: The Kill

Hoooollly Cow! Excellent just excellent. 

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Date: March 22 2014 06:59 am
Title: The Kill

Damn, is all I can say.  She is going to rot in prison and maybe get the death penalty because she loved him.  She won't even raise her baby.  He needs to be tortured with guilt.  Just damn, damn, damn

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 05:29 am
Title: Hunter/Gatherer

Great chapter.

I feel for Celia because her need for his happiness will be their downfall.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 05:51 am
Title: Hunter/Gatherer

This story has sucked me in! Please keep it coming. Is this IR or will they meet a black female that changes everything for them? 

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2014 02:23 am
Title: Hunter/Gatherer

Nice update keep it coming.

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Date: February 26 2014 04:37 pm
Title: Mind of a Killer

I see this is going to be a deep dark drama.

I'm going to hang in there with you.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 11:39 pm
Title: Mind of a Killer

Interesting story so far.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 06:22 pm
Title: Mind of a Killer

Dark and deep please keep it coming.

Author's Response:

Thank you much for the read and review!! :)

 Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 02:57 am
Title: Mind of a Killer

I was talking to a friend of mine (a fellow VC writer) about how I wished someone would write some out of the box, twisted dark shit. Not too many on here do, because of stupid backlash and other crap. Me? I love this type of fiction, now I'm not saying I don't love a good sappy love story, I do but I also love dark things...this is a dark thing I will mark as a favorite of mine. You knocked me off my seat with this first chapter. 

Keep writing, do as your muse tells you.

I love the relationship of Jay & Celia, you can see the deep intense love they share. Just how much love can one person heart hold for another, when that person happens to be a serial killer? Well, I think this story will answer that.

I love the friendship of Jay & JC. With JC being a shrink and all, I know he thinks he's got the best of wet dreams of anyone in his profession...he got a front row sit in the mind of a killer...who is also his best fuckin friend! 

I couldn't help but chuckle at Celia. Homegirl gave two shits about her man killing women, just don't screw them behind her back. She's scared that he would find someone new. I believe he will never leave his "light". But I can understand her fear. 

I love it. Write more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I enjoyed your comments, especially about Celia. She's a very strong woman to be able to deal with the situation she's in but it's affected her, obviously. She irrational because of her love for him, so she allows him to be who he is but she still wants a "normal" relationship with him. She's content with him, but torn about the details of what's involved. 

 

Thank you you again for the read and review, glad you like it so far :)

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 11:12 pm
Title: Mind of a Killer

Wow!!!! I like it ... Scary but I like it 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read!

 Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 08:25 pm
Title: Mind of a Killer

Wow that was dark & unexpected

Author's Response:

This is something new for me so I hope you guys are liking it. Thanks for the read and review!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 06:27 pm


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