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Title: Chapter 75

Oh well, will happily follow you there... :)

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2016 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 45

Wow, I like your story very much. I don't mind the chapter lengths, and I love the how you have written this story. I believe in connecting characters with the reader by having them evolve through the chapters. 

Sorry to read some are not happy, but can I put it to you like this... Focus on your positive readers like me. 

Think of those readers as they're loss. And some will most likely still read just out of curiosity ... Lol

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2016 02:18 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I feel so sick for her, ugh. This explains so much now. Now I get the 5 yrs. part.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2016 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 26

I have two things to address, but first my compliments to the author, girl I love this story... And thank you for the many chapters, I am currently at chapter 26. 

I stopped to read the reviews to see if any one else had noticed something in the story. In chapter one Jodi was 42. She states she hadn't had sex for 10 yrs, but recalls 5 yrs. ago (her rape) when she was 17 ( a teenager) making her actually 22 and not 42. I am going to assume the 42 was a typo, cause the math confuses me. This is not a put down, I believe sometimes a story changes direction and how it began does not really fit how it continues or concludes. 

The comment that was dubious of a plus size Black woman who is a homebody/wallflower/late-bloomer attracting good looking, financially established, interested White men. Well that is a reality which is currently happening with a friend of mine down South. Now in her ally forties she has 2 Black men and 1 White guy each vying to be her man. She confided in me that she was taken aback by all the attention, like 'where were these guys years ago?' I told her to enjoy it and that she was due.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2016 05:48 pm

Title: Chapter 75

Hello Daugther, Personally I prefer long stories. Waiting patiently for part two of your wonderful novel. Take care Bain

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 75

I love long sagas as weel.  Iwill be on the look out for PArt 2

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter 75

I love long sagas!! Looking forward to part time!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 05:23 pm

Title: Chapter 73

Jodi's so messed up due yo being raped all those years, then being used by the guys in college, then discarded like trash, that when a nice guy comes along she doesn't know how to treat him or how to act around him. She definitely needs some intensive therapy.

Please Kill Kirk already! He is a blight walking around on the earth! Please stop him from hurting Jodi again!  Somehow that video camera has to be discovered and tracked back to CRAZY ASS Kirk and he will be arrested without bail!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 11:08 pm

Title: Chapter 73

Daaaaannnnggggg. Shit is about to get really real! 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 12:00 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ah Jodi, I was so afraid for her on that cruise ship. So glad Garrett got shipped off. I am conflicted about Steve. He was such an ass to her in the beginning, but then I think he really does care for her, but is just a tool about showing it. For that other creepy joker, I knew it was something else he was doing at Jodie's house. I just need Somebody to beat him down just once please dear God. Jodi I feel this a turn for her, she really does need to get some help. Can't wait to read more. I want to start over at the beginning and begin again.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 12:21 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ah Jodi, I was so afraid for her on that cruise ship. So glad Garrett got shipped off. I am conflicted about Steve. He was such an ass to her in the beginning, but then I think he really does care for her, but is just a tool about showing it. For that other creepy joker, I knew it was something else he was doing at Jodie's house. I just need Somebody to beat him down just once please dear God. Jodi I feel this a turn for her, she really does need to get some help. Can't wait to read more. I want to start over at the beginning and begin again.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 07:36 pm

Title: Chapter 73

To Anonymous- Anonymous ---I added some of the photos back...some were erroneously deleted...chapters prior to the yacht photos.

Reviewer: daughter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 03:42 am

Title: Character Pics

I cant see to see the character pictures 



Author's Response:

So Sorry, AnonymousAnonymous,

I havent had any others comment on not being able to view them. Again I am sorry ...maybe you have another version on your computer.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 09:22 pm

Title: Chapter 72

Jodi needs to tell her brother everything, so he can help her and beat the crap out of that so called friend of his that raped her and has continuously tormenting her...along with that assailed Garrett.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 04:03 pm

Title: Chapter 72

Aww poor Steve!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2015 06:58 am

Title: Chapter 72

Jodi, please get back into therapy. Steve was just calling to check on you and you respond with a stank attitude.    You were raped by Kevin initially but everything after that is all on you.  You need to tell your family what happened to you so they can know who you truly are and help you heal.  Mitch and Steve getting angry at Steve for sexing up Jodi was crazy.  Jodi wasn't forced but she needs help. Until she confronts her demons she will never have a normal relationship and shouldn't procreate.  A ho never makes a good house wife. Run the other way Steve. You and your children deserve so much more than Jodi can give can. Her pyche is too badly damaged and she refuses to get help. When is Jodi going to Steve and his brothers the real Jodi?  Currently Jodi ain't worth the anger that you showed Steve.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 12:21 pm

Title: Chapter 72

Bravo Jodi. You are finally understanding why you think and reacted to certain triggers. Now I just need Eddie to stomp Garrett into the ground. Well done Daugter and thank you .

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 72

Why can't she get out this cycle of abuse

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 71

Garrett, I knew that joker was too slick for some reason. This is so good.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 02:13 am

Title: Chapter 71

Are all the besides Eddie lecherous aholes?  Jodi and therapy need to hecome synonymous, because it's past hard to to sympathize ie even empathize with her.  I am just annoyed that neither Josephine or Eddie n5oticef the change that took place in Jodi. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 71

Ugh!! When is she going to stop being a victim?? She's killing me!!! I hope she grows a pair and tells Garrett to fuck off!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 10:15 pm

Title: Chapter 71

I'm going to used some foul language right now. Jodi needs to kick that bitch ass, and tell Eddie about that punk. Please do not allow Jodi took take any shit off of Garrett. Totally mad and want to jump into this story line and beat the scap out of Garrett. Please do not let Jodi become another victim to this loser, she feeling good and she back with her family. Sorry, but I want Jodi not to feel like she has to take shit off people. Thank you for the update. Now I need to go calm down.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 09:23 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Wow..... Did she just have sex with a pillow? That is extremely different. I won't look at my pillow the same when I get off work tonight. LOl. A freak for sure. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 1

Lol get a good lay and then take a nap. Haha. That always solves the problem. Hehe

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 70

Where have you been!?! 😁

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 06:05 pm



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