I hope Kirk got hit by a bus on his way to the meeting!!  I have a bad feeling about this!!  Update soon please!!

I'm still trying to figure out why Eddie stayed friends and is in business with Kirk?  I understand the relationship they have had in the beginning but Kirk is more of a nuisance then anything.  If Kirk was just some random employee I'm quite sure Eddie would've gotten rid of him before now.  It doesn't seem like he is somebody that will cause the business to fail if Kirk is given the boot. Kirk already had a hand in Eddie's personal life...Eddie just doesn't know it yet.  And Eddie will feel like the worse brother there is for not protecting Jodi. 

I hope the skeletons will fall out the closet really soon. 

20 years!!! wow... why so long...and will she tell her brother about that jerk that raped her? smh... i think it gonna all come out soon.. very soon.

. awesome update!!!

Just ready the last two chapters, can't believe cray cray is still obessed with Jodi. It will be good for her to see her brother, I can see Steve really cares for her. 

Steve just made me really happy, Jodi continues to make my teeth itch!!  I guess that both Steve and Mitch will be at that meeting on Monday?  I don't have a good feeling about this meeting, Jodi will go completely off the deep in when she sees Kirk.  I am terrified for Jodi!!!

Shit! I was hoping this as swipe was out of the picture forever.

This is when Jodi will have a total mental break down and loose her job in the process.  Kirk is still crazy I see, whatever happens I just hope that he ends up in jail.

Jodi needs to stop act so stubborn, but hey I have faith that she will realize that she nees help. Secondly with Kirk, EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! And OOOOOOOOOOOOOH! I CAN'T STAND HIM AND HE'S STILL ALIVE! Is he like 70 now? Even though I am not too happy to read anything about Kirk, but I am disgustingly glad that he is back in the picture because now I am feeling like that Jodi will finally have enough courage to fight against Kirk and tell him that she is not what he has described her to be and that he will not have power over her life anymore. Then, I believe that Jodi will tell her brother what Kirk has done to her so Eddie can eventually KILL Kirk the rapist, but I am MORE interested in Jodi and Eddie's reunion because she really needs her family. But, Kirk...YUCK!

Good Update!

That bastard "Kirk" is rearing his ugly head. I hope "Jodi' does not fall apart when this punk arrived on the scene.As always excellent writing. Thank you. 

To be honest, at first, I didn't want to read this story when you posted it. Thinking it's another story built on the same pattern as many BW/WM stories. Then I skipped a few chapters and read out of curiosity. When I understood how this story was a real journey for a woman who doesn't even realize she's a victim who needs help, I went back to read it from the begining. I just want to say that I really appreciate the length of your chapters and update. On the contrary, when it's good, famished readers like me love reading long and regular updates. Some people don't appreciate low development, but the strength of this story is that in reality, things take quite some time to unfold. Sometime, even if you want your life to move on, you feel yourself being stuck and unable to move or do anything to change and you curse yourself for not being strong enough to do anything about that. In real life, things don't bent to your will. And this is axactly what I appreciate in your story. It's like in some stories or series when in the same chapter/episode a major life changing issue appears and is solved. I'm like, what the heck?! It's impossible in real life !! Oh, and by the way, I think that you own your story, you're not obliged to change how you planned it just because of a bunch of reviews. Do whatever you want, we're free to opt out. Personnaly, I don't review stories I really don't appreciate, if it's not to make constructive critics which will make me appreciate the story more, I don't see the point of critisizing just for the sole purpose of making the writer more self-conscious. It's pointless. Please, don't finish your story privately, I'm glad you shared it with us. So, do whatever you want, I'll continue regularly reading (sending subliminal message so that you'll keep updating often lol) Jodi's realistic journey. You did a really good job !!

My opinion is that your story is yours.  Tell your story the way you see it.  A great author writes from the passion within.  Not to please others.   The reason the valent chamber is so much better than literotica and sites like it is because of the real gems that are developed here.  A real publish worthy story takes time and development.  Jodi's journey is very real.  Many women experience and exercise similar struggles and poor judgment.   I am looking forward to the journey.   Should you decide not to continue here please allow me to read the rest. 

omg!!!! my friend shared this story on facebook... wowowowo!!!! im so in love with this story..so to hear you might not post anymore chapters i almost started to cry..ive been reading this story none stop and i know should have been left a comment but its soooo good i just kept clicking next..next ..lol... i couldnt put it down. so please whatever you do dont stop posting. forget about the lames who dont understand this story. i was once a jody..hell still is.. and my story is on going.. reading this has helped me not feel so strange for being like i am..bless you sugar!!!