Title: Chapter 14

This was so great but so sad

Reviewer: Zkilla216 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 09:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Exciting, romantic! Just the language of the prose narration was a bit off. I don't watch Spartacus, so I don't know if that was how they talk. But it really felt roman to me. Great job!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 29 2014 07:22 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Great chapter! Gallius is going to steal Nona's heart!  I am definitely rooting for him!

Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 04:20 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I was so happy to see pics of the men Nona's life!! Although Julius is beautiful in his own right, Gallius has my heart!!

Reviewer: Leogina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 08:46 am

Title: Chapter 14

I've really enjoyed reading this...watched a little bit of the show Spartacus but can't really remember any of the players.  I do remember it being really raunchy and bloody though :)

Too bad Nona died in the end, and I feel sorry for poor Gallius.

Very interesting read; thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 09:06 pm

Title: Chapter 14

What the FRACK JUST  HAPPENED !!!!!!!!!!!     what a shocker damnnnnnnnnn  biggest twist everrrrrrrWOW  WOW 5 stars 

Reviewer: LIBBY Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 05:27 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Powerful.  I enjoyed how weaved this beautiful story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 05:08 pm

Title: Chapter 14

SCHWAT just happened... I did not gurllllll what are you trying to do to me

Welp you did surprise me. No one won damn tough life y'all 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 06:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

Whimper cry.....cry some more, damn I loved it!

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 04:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks guys!

Reviewer: TheHistorian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 13

i don't think Nona is a whore in fact I'dbe hella confused in said situation as well. I mean damn Gaius is married wth and what exactly was he about to do on that table... state his dominance I mean Gaius come on that's a bit too much calm down

And then we have Gallius about to fight lions damn

We shall see what happens. There's so many possible outcomes :O

 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 12

And it continues!!!! 

It's like I'm watching an episode all over again brilliant more please!

 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 01:00 am

Title: Chapter 11

OH LAWD noooooooo troublessss 

We have lions fighting lions, my sexy gaul about to be beat, Marena about to be beat... everybody about to be beay. I can't keep up 

Keep it coming!!!



Author's Response:

LOL THANKS

Reviewer: thincakes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 12:41 am

Title: Chapter 10

HOOOOOOOOOO... what is going on Gaius is overcome with jealousy, insanity, so much WOW

DAMN I don't even know where to start... bring on the rest! I'm excited to see what happens 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 11:43 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Damn! I know he's a Roman and married, but I do feel bad for him. I think he does love her. I feel like Nona's feelings toward him vanished so quickly, or am I jumping to conclusions? Did they have an agreement that he would never sleep with his wife? He does need an heir, especially in this time period. 



Author's Response:

dgreen1980 she loves him...like LOVESSS HIM.....but he does belong to someone else and she just cant take it anymore...sometimes the side chick gets tired too, and now that they have a little space in between them Gallius creeping his way to her more and more.....Love went realllly quickly in this time lol I'm trying tosee how it will play out

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter. I'm torn between who I want Nona to be with more.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 09:56 pm

Title: Chapter 9

LOLLLLL.... ok so my girl Marena has a problem listening. See why does she have to go create more problems for herself. We only mean for her to be careful not that she can't see the man anymore damn... of well those who won't listen will have to forced to learn unfotunately 

Also this little triangle Welp I;m interested to see what you do with it as I have only one outcome in my mind.

Reviewer: thincakes Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 09:53 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Inspiration Cast

LOL you went there with Spartacus I see you...*currently watches God's of the arena* lol 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 08:56 pm

Title: Chapter 6

You're sense of pacing the story is excellent. I am really enjoying it. Thanks much!

Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 07:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks you guys I appreciate all of you! Just know that this is much more than a sex novel

Reviewer: TheHistorian Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 06:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Oh my dear, I'm simply in love with your story!!!!! More than well written, the setting is perfect, the characters...everything! Welcome, you did a great job. And I just loved Spartacus, one of the best series ever made. I can't wait to read more!!!!!

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 12:01 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Yes how dare those non-writers have an opinion because only writers are aloud to give feedback anyway nice story I'm a huge spartacus fan.

Reviewer: Tori Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 10:47 am

Title: Chapter 6

Awesome, can you post some picture of Nona , her cousin, and their lover!If I can make a suggestion, you should make Nona  be Shirley b. Eniang or Kylie bunbury. Awesome job, I love reading historical ir 

Reviewer: Iloveheels Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 09:42 am

Title: Chapter 6

I love this...I hope you keep going :-) 

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 09:08 am

Title: Chapter 1

Awesome Sauce !!!!!!! Keep going!

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 04:15 am



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