Title: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

I want more, i want more. 



Author's Response:

I'm posting, this weekend.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 11 2014 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Hmm....Interesting.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you find it that way. I'm hoping the story won't be at all typical.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 11:21 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

This story seems ready interesting look forward to the next post



Author's Response:

Just hold on to your seat. It gets a little interesting from here.

Reviewer: to last to login Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 06:46 am

Title: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

I like the story and it's good. Some sentences are run-ons and can be rewritten and there a few puntucation errors need to be corrected, but overall it in an interesting story. Having someone else proofread will help catch these small mistakes. I do like Warrick's parents. THey seem fun and down to earth despite being the head hanchos of all of the Weres. I am eagerly awaiting the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you, so much! It's really hard to get my writing group to read this story. None of them are into the genre, and I haven't broken into the sc fi/fantasy circles, yet. I would appreciate it if you would send me any parts that need correcting, so that I can get on them.

Reviewer: Cowboys Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 05:48 am

Title: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

Please continue....i would like to see where you take us.



Author's Response:

Thank you! With the outpouring of support I've received today, I don't plan on going anywhere. It's just that I'm up late every night, and up early every morning, trying to get on my grind and promote my story. It's the one that could lead to time to promote the next, and the next. Before you know it, maybe I'll be in a position to recommend another author, and people will follow. I certainly hope so.

Reviewer: Lovablebbw82 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 04:23 am

Title: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

Loving this story so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

I really love this book.   Please update more



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll be updating this weekend. You'll get to see more of the relationship between Warrick's parents in the next chapter. Then, watch out! His story takes a turn for the unexpected.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 03:45 am

Title: Chapter 2 The History Lesson Continues, and TMI!

I think I may come to really enjoy this story however I find myself wishing that you wouldn't split things up the way you have. I understand not wanting to overwhelm the readers but at least the last tqo chapters could have been made into one. The break was unnecessary and a nit inconvenient. 

 

But that said I am genuinely excited to see where this is going.

Reviewer: ThisSavageOne Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 2 The History Lesson Continues, and TMI!

Please contine with the update.  Wonderful chapter

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Great start

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

I think I'm enjoying the story, but I'm confused with the were-technicalities of it all and sometimes the story structure is a bit hard to understand. I'll misinterpret who's talking or what's being explained. I imagine that it will all come together in a while, but for the first three chapters is a bit overwhelming considering all three took place in the same location. As a reader I find it difficult to read three chapters with the same thing happening, it makes me lose interest in the story. From the way chapter 3 ended, I know the next one should be different and that excites me. I'm sure it will all come together eventually. 

 

I enjoy the characters and the fact that the family can go from serious to playful in a matter of seconds. I also enjoy that your new alpha is playful, this is an almost direct contrast to other were stories where the alpha is always serious (because it's serious business). It's a great set-up for development. His dad is my favorite so far because he's the most dynamic. 

 

Will there be cast pics, I find a story is more relatable if I know how the characters will look or at least semi-decent descriptions, being left in the dark in relation to who I'm reading makes me less invested 

 

Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: JB Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 02:28 am

Title: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

When is ol' girl going to show up? 



Author's Response:

Lol! She'll be here, soon. Book 1 is a back story, so both of them have to be thorough. So far, the characters have told me that the couple barely meets in Book 1. Book 2 is where the mates will be face-to face. However, they've been known to change their minds on me, so hold tight.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 01:31 am

Title: Chapter 3 Twenty-One And A Mate?

I have say I'm really enjoying this story & how it's coming along can't wait til their guest arrive I'm sure it's gonna be exciting for Warricks mom to have her god daughter there & I'm sure crazy for him can't wait for all his parents said would happen to him happen but before she comes can we get alittle more insight on her & the things she's been doing or something thanks can't wait for the next

Author's Response:

You'll definitely gain insight into Thandie's world. You'll probably want to pound me over the head before it's over but, as far as I know, the mates will barely meet in this story. Book 2 is where they come together. Book 1 is building their world. I'll be introducing some fairly obscure myths from around the world, because I want this to be a true MC story. If you would like, feel free to contribute any legendary beings and tales. I find inspiration in the oddest places. Like by watching Ancient Aliens, lol.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 2 The History Lesson Continues, and TMI!

Bwahahahahaha!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad that you're enjoying the comedic aspects of it.

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The History Lesson Continues, and TMI!

Please continue!! Need to see where this goes....



Author's Response:

No worries. I definitely will.

Reviewer: Lovablebbw82 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The History Lesson Continues, and TMI!

Really like the this ch. On their history . I thought it very funny when they did their little why do you want a girl when you have sons like this until she started going through the things only females do together

Author's Response:

Lol! I'm glad you like it. One of my friends in college came from a family of only sons. When his parents came to the state, his mom would sometimes hang out with his group of girlfriends. He was always thoroughly disgusted that she wanted to be with us, rather than him. He would get up to all kinds of antics, to prove to her that hanging with the fellas while they visited gun shops and played sports should make her happy. Yet, somehow, she always chose to go and get her nails done, with us, and meet them for dinner later.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 08:51 am

Title: Chapter 2 The History Lesson Continues, and TMI!

Loving this story so far.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope you'll continue to follow.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 03:35 am

Title: Chapter 2 The History Lesson Continues, and TMI!

I love Warrick!!   I love how his parents not to fuck Thandie, too funny. Who kneew a story where i love all of the characters that have been intoduced. 



Author's Response:

Lol! What can I say? Warrick reminds me of my btothers when they were young and randy. The parents remind me of my own, when they were fighting to ensure that all of their grandchildren would be born to adults who could take care of them.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Me likey! More please.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Another chapter just posted.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Wow, I'm really interested in reading more ! Nice begining. I liked "Sandy the super brain"! I can't wait to meet the born were! Great job!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, so much! I hope that you will love Thandie, as much as I do. Not long now, until we'll be meeting her.

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 04:36 pm

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Quite interesting Please update I can hardly wait

Author's Response:

I just updated. I hope to hear from you about the next chapter.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 03:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Me likey! More please!



Author's Response:

The next chapter is up. I love your reviews! Thank you for always being so supportive.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 02:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Real interesting start - look forward to the read!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you are enjoying it. The next chapter is posted. I hope you'll enjoy that one just as much.

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 11:36 am

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

Fascinating



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 09:46 am

Title: Chapter 1: A History Lesson for Little Pup

I'm loving where this is going!!!! A bonus is that the heroine is bbw!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeees!!



Author's Response:

I feel the same way. I love that she is a young woman with curves.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 05:28 am



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