Reviews For Breaking Through
Title: Chapter 3

I like the stroy's pace! Akira and Kassidy should have the talk because right it seems that if He does not act fast, Michael will step in!



Author's Response:

I think you're right. Kassidy seems to have sparked something in Malcolm. Akira definitely needs to man up if he wants Kass. Thank you for reading and reviewing KATT.

Reviewer: KATT Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 04:30 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Akira is teenage boy and when a girl offers up free services they cease to think with the big head. He was stupid and will have a lot explaining to do when he finally talk to Kass. Will she believe him when he tells her how he feels about is the question especially after all of his recent activity?



Author's Response:

Pmgayles!!!  Yes!! you are absolutely right!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2014 03:39 pm

Title: Chapter 3

When she sobers up Akira can talk to her. Her mother is abusive and should be shot point blank right between her eyes.  She needs to be able to be able to get away,  like a track scholarship to go to college or something.  I feel bad for this kids, they grew up with parents who didn't love them. More please.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for continuing to read and review. They will grow up and we'll get to see how they turn out.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2014 03:34 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I am confused by Akira, what did he expect her to do.  He never claimed he liked her in a non friendship way, she obviously feel if he could sleep with a girl in Japan and then get a blowjob while she is in the house that this screams I like you.  Ummm, no, it screams the opposite.  Was really getting that head job worth losing out on her.  Kinda disappointed in Akira.  Let's see what the next chapter brings.



Author's Response:

I think Akira is really disapointed in himself.  Next chapter will be explanations and confessions, we'll see what comes out of it. Thank you for reading it and reviewing.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 18 2014 09:05 am



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