Reviews For Sugar Baby Love
Title: Before the Ball

Who in the hell is that bitch plotting with? It has to be someone from the hospital... Mason maybe? Or even the dad. Ooo I don't like her ass. I hope she isn't going to try and ruin the event his parents are hosting.. That would be bad. I hope this introduction goes well. No problems!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 04:16 am

Title: Movers and Antics

I knew that bitch wouldn't quit. Got damn. Form his sake he better hope that baby isn't his or he can cancel everything with Elise. I'm sure she heard everything so there isn't much to explain to her. But at the same time, she knows that girl is loopy, so she might not take it to heart. Be cautious but don't forget your only interaction with her at that event. Don't jump to conclusions until the DNA test says he is the father. That's the smartest thing to do. Why did that damn girl have to show up causing trouble. Just LET IT GO HE DOESNT WANT YOU!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 04:07 am

Title: Pillow Talks

Wow. Why is he giving her that much money? If that's not a lot of money to him then just how much money does he have. I don't know if her meeting his parents is going to go good. I know his mom will be happy but I dont know about his dad. I'm so excited for them.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 04:10 pm

Title: Love me forever

This was a great scene. He was gentle with her until she got used to him and they were both filled with intense passion. True love making. They are in love!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 03:51 pm

Title: Beginnings

Mason is going to be trouble, she should have spoken with her mentor about it. Whomcares that its his dad. Cover your ass and make it known that he has been harassing you. Dnt wait until he gets you in trouble and possibly kicked out the program or something. What he did for him was so nice. She needed that spamday especially. A man that can cook too?! What can't this man do?? And she told him!!!! Its on now. They will be getting married soon. Lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 03:38 pm

Title: Beach Confessions

That was great. Just a normal day for the both of them. You find out so mich about Jameson, he is extremely independent. And he taught her to swim. Lol. Did he just say that he thinks he loves her? Hmm

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 03:17 pm

Title: Car Conversations

I think she is ready for a relationship but not to the degree he is ready for. But I think she will get there soon. She was ready to give up the goods. Lol. I like Carol, she shut those tricks up quick. Now this whole wife, fiancé thing is going to get them caught up if that doesn't happen soon or she isn't at least wearing a ring. She better not switch up once they get home. I would be passed if she does. Don't fight the progress.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 03:07 pm

Title: Dinner and Dancing

Woah!!!! She was extremely thankful I see. This is definitely a step. I didnt think she was a virgin, this makes things even more interesting because giving someone your virginity is special. I'mcan't believe his associate and wife has the nerve to say the things they did. How freaking rude. I commend her for holding face amidst that kind of treatment. People can be so judgmental.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 02:52 pm

Title: Trips and Promises

Uh oh. This Mason character is not going to be good. I hope this upcoming drama from him doesn't sabotage her career and clinicals. Who is Larry? A bodyguard? Aww he is taking her somewhere tropical! Bathing suits!!! Just how thankful is she?  

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 02:35 pm

Title: Special Places

Aww look at her sharing something so special with him. I thought she was just studying. Lol. But I'm glad she is going to stop acting like that, it was quite annoying. These nicknames are adorable! And about this kiss honey!!! Whew. This is definitely going to develop into something.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 02:24 pm

Title: Compromise

This Jen chick needs to check herself. Let it go, damn. I'm glad that she realized that she was going over board and did that. Hopefully things get better

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Date: July 31 2015 04:30 am

Title: Friends? Pt 1

I think they will develop a friendship. That's the only way they will survive this with each other. She's right, those gifts and money do nothing for her. He better give her time to study, becoming a surgeon isn't easy work.

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Date: July 31 2015 04:17 am

Title: Boundaries

Jameson is too much. Lol. She has a driver, chef, does she have a butler too? He was serious about the red thing. She can't even sleep. He wants to be close to her. Hehe

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 04:05 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wait? So she has to give you a baby if she doesn't fall in love with you? Thats a bit dar fetched. She is in a male dominated profession so making male friends is inevitable. That whole you come when in call thing is kinda crazy too. What if she is in the middle of studying or research or clinicals or with her best friend. You can't expect her to stop her life for you. Not all the time at least. Why doesn't she believe in marriage? Even as a surgeon, marriage could work she would have to be with someone who understands how mich her career means to her. I don't blame her for crying, I would too. Its degrading almost. But you have to do what you have to do to survive

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 03:56 am

Title: Clause

Wow. That is definitely a clause to pay attention to. Lol. I'm glad their date wasn't all that weird, some moments but overall a good date. What does he mean she won't be in a world she has known? Is he going to inteoduce her to his world or something? What does he want from her? I know she's going to sign the contract, she needs the money. A year isn't long at all. But does love really have a time frame?   

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 03:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting. I really like that he achieved everything on his own. Especially so because he didn't have to, he had a ready made business waiting for him and instead he started his own. I'mthink his father should be proud not resentful, he proved to be more than just someone born into money. That says a lot about his character and work ethic. Mow, its never good to co sums yourself in any one thing, at least in my opinion. Focusing solely on work will lead to a life of loneliness. You are going to look back and life will have passed you by. Then what will you be able to say about the life you lived? You were successful yes but you didn't have true happiness and never experienced love.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 03:27 am

Title: School Woes

Aww poor Elise, that's a fucked up situation to be in but its reality. I hope this guy isn't crazy. He'll I should have thought of that in undergrad, saved me some headache. Lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 02:59 am

Title: Cast

Elise is beautiful

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 02:49 am

Title: Breakdowns

Please do there a bunch of interracial stories and I'm all for it but the only black ones are all stereotypical ghetto ones.

Reviewer: Chasz143 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 03:25 pm

Title: Breakdowns

Jamie, Jamie, Jamie. I love you, but dang you should've realized when you and Elise declared your feelings/affections/love for each other things in the contract needed to be revised, or even trashed, since it was no longer about appearances. Elise has grown by leaps and bounds and Jamie has grown but at a slower pace. I feel bad for Elise for everything that's going on at the hospital. It's tough to be in a work or school environment where you can't open up to your peers or co-workers for fear of them talking about you. To not have your supervisor support you as well, makes it even worse. Hopefully, her residency rotation at this hospital is almost over. I hope whatever Jamie's mom said to her were words of encouragement that will help her get through these tough times. I want Jamie to have a talk with Clark and Lance  with Nina hearing it so she can talk some sense into him about Elise. Great chapter!! 

I'm going to need an update on Clark soon!! I love him almost as much as Lance :)

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 01:58 pm

Title: Breakdowns

Very interesting chapter. Jameson to me has taken a step backwards while Elise is trying to make strides forward but needs to assert herself more.

As for your question I think that some people are tripping about what is going on lately in the media and using that as an excuse to be anti bwwm which is crazy. Some new "readers" are not really readers but trolls here to stop what they see as "black hate".

Now despite that..... I say write what you want. If you like to write IRR stories then continue to do so and if you want to write a regular story than do so as well. I like this site because I don't know of any site like it, a site that celebrates the variety of WOC particularly black women. The fact that this site says it's for WOC but the majority I would say 98% of the stories on here feature a black woman says a lot about the lack of representation of black women in stories. Women of other races do not flock to this site to post stories why? because they do not feel the need to. A black heroine is more important. I prefer IRR but to each their own.

Update Soon.

Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 08:32 am

Title: Breakdowns

Ok, time to get in to Jameson a bit. He's being unfair and immature about this contract at this point. He wants it both ways. Elise has matured and put in a lot to the relationship in terms of herself. Jameson is being selfish. If he doesn't think he has the goods to keep her now, thr. He never will. I got on to Elise in the beginning for taking more than giving, but that's what Jameson is doing. He wants guarantees that people can't really give. Anything can happen at any time. He's trying to use money and that contract like some crystal ball! That's not fair.



Author's Response:

Yes he is using his money as a placeholder which sucks. So we will get to see more of his thoughts. Thanks so much.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 03:30 am

Title: Breakdowns

I hope they pull through and let her get thru this internship and have Jamison fix Mason, Martin whatever his name is...he is getting on my nerves.  The dude that is so frakin entitled he can't handle ONE woman telling him no...please I feel there is more to it than that.

Now I thought the ValentChamber was here to express interracial couplings with the heroine being black unlike 80% of the books that are published in mainstream...am I mistaken, please let me know because if so I am unsure about the complaints.

Regardless I just want the woman to be a POC, because we do not get the benefit of being the "love interest" stories, we're typically more of the "love interest, sassy, loud mouth, single best friend" in movies and books. 

Whatever you write, I will read.



Author's Response:

Yeah his name is Mason lol. 

When I first joined I was specifically looking for a site like this so I'm guessing it's New readers. Thanks for yourinput 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 02:35 am

Title: Breakdowns

I am glad Elise and Jameson had an heart to heart! !  Now I would like to see Jamie handle that situation for Elise at work.  I really want to see how Jamie and his parents deal with crazy the bitch claiming to pregnant with Jamie's baby.  Elise don't pull away from Jamie but work on making your relationship stronger.  Jamie quit playing and do right by Elise tear up that contract she loves you.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 01:03 am

Title: Breakdowns

I think that the contract is stupid, I also think that Jameson is a scared insecure jerk!. Makes me wonder what is he going to be putting her through. If he honestly loved her, he would trust that she would love him regardless of a piece of paper. To me she has more to lose than him. To your question at the end, I say write what you feel. Love is love rather it's between a black women/ white man or a black women/black man.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 01:03 am



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