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Title: Closer

Macy ain't pregnant Brian. Your parents don't like Macy,  your best friend and co-worker doesn't like Macy, so why do you?  Drop the ho, Brian!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 02:45 pm

Title: Closer

Brian, I'm thisclose to wanting to hit you in the throat. Listen to your boys. You need to figure out what you really want. You're still entangled with that psycho sheBeast and if you can't disentangle yourself, you need to leave Kelly/Zoey alone. You will only hurt her.

and Darren, I don't think that you're ready for Danica just yet.

Thanks for the update. Loving this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 06:38 am

Title: Closer

More! :-)

Reviewer: kaci Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 16 2016 11:15 pm

Title: A Break In the Case

I hope Harvey has a conscience and don't give Macy the information he found out about Kelly. Now I see why she went along with that crazy deal ( to protect her father not David ) Thanks honey for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2016 11:13 pm

Title: A Break In the Case

This story is so fascinating! I like that more information about Kelly is coming out.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 05 2016 03:28 am

Title: A Break In the Case

Don't dive that ho Macy any information  on Kelly.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 05:29 am

Title: A Break In the Case

Very good story...even better the second time around.

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Date: December 02 2016 04:26 am

Title: Strange Behavior

It's time for Brian to become a investigator. Macy needs to be stopped, I believe this chick will try to steal someone's baby to pass it off as Brian's. Thanks honey for the double updates.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2016 02:29 am

Title: Dinner

I like Brian's parents already.

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Date: December 01 2016 02:25 am

Title: Strange Behavior

Brian, you still slow. btw, no one says you have to marry this woman. You could co-parent that mythical baby of yours.

That Macy is evil enough to stage an accident with Zoey/Kelly as the culprit and conveniently loses that mythical baby. I hope not, but she's just that evil.

I hope Zoey/Kelly does leave that house before more harm befalls her. How can Brian not feel the vibes Macy throws at Zoey/Kelly? She's good at hiding, but dang, Brian is being really obtuse.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2016 06:28 am

Title: Strange Behavior

For such a bright man Brian is slow about figuring out Macy. All he had to do is call the Dr's office. Poor Kelly the memories of abuse are coming back.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2016 02:06 am

Title: Strange Behavior

Great update! Looking forward to the next!

Reviewer: kaci Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 29 2016 09:08 pm

Title: Strange Behavior

Brian that ho Macy ain't pregnant!!  Take to the doctor and have a pregnancy test done. Why is he spent stupid? Macy you aren't his wife yet!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2016 04:53 am

Title: Dinner

Loving his parents right now.  When is Brian going to wake up and kick Macy to the curb?

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Date: November 27 2016 12:34 am

Title: Confessions

This is getting so good. Update soon plz!

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Date: November 21 2016 10:13 am

Title: Confessions

Girl... this was deep!! I would've let Diablo kill him. Why? do I have to suffer for your addiction and mistakes. I hope in my heart she don't take him back. Girl, Macy is a trip!! this woman is so diabolical, she must be used to everything going her way. I like the idea of Kelly living with his parents, then she would be away from that evil woman. And his parents can see what Macy is truly about, because she will show her hand. Thanks honey for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2016 04:05 pm

Title: Confessions

Brian, that Macy person CONTINUES to show you who she is and you CONTINUE to be complicit in her antics. gah

There are no words for Henry. He's scum and all of the sniveling in the world will not justify what he did. I so hope that Kelly remembers EVERYTHING.

Great update, Chica. It really ticked me off.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2016 12:49 am

Title: Confessions

That ho Macy ain't pregnant Brian!!  Get rid of her ass quick.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2016 11:37 pm

Title: Confessions

Henry is nothing but a weak ahole and Zoey is better off without him.

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Date: November 19 2016 11:35 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

Dear Lord.  Once Zoey/Kelly remembers what that pathetic person she once called a husband did to her, will she be able to ever trust any man again?   Great story, please keep writing.  Macy is such a cliche'.  If she loved something beyond herself, she wouldn't have to be threatened by Kelly's presence.  And when has it ever work to fake pregnancy to hold on to a  man. 

Reviewer: spklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 19 2016 07:10 pm

Title: Confessions

Whoa thats deep

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Date: November 19 2016 07:08 pm

Title: The Pier

lying ass bitch, i hate her

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2016 09:41 pm

Title: The Pier

Girl, Macy is dangerous. I'm scared for Kelly and what Macy will do next. Brian don't fall for the lies, go get a home pregnancy test and make her pee on the stick. Then go with her to the doctor and make her take a blood test. This chick is so desperate, now she's going to claim that Kelly is stressing her out and harming the baby. I hope Brian finds out the truth real quick. I loved their time at the pier and their budding friendship. I'm team Macy has to go!! Thanks honey for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 12:54 pm

Title: The Pier

Brian Macy isn't pregnant that ho is trying to trap you.  Why is he so stupid?  In this version you had Macy push her down the stairs, when is ho going to die?  I am so sick of Macy!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 01:12 am

Title: Working Girl

Brian it's time to let Macy go. This jealousy is getting out of hand, plus you don't want her anymore. I'm sure your business will still stand without Macy and her family. I knew work life was going to be fun!! but Kelly girl, don't lay where you play. Find someone who's not your "crush" bestfriend. Not cool Brian, get rid of Macy first and then make your move. Thanks for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 01:55 pm



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